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It's getting a lot better, although I'm having trouble finding the joints on the arms (Think about it, you don't hold a sword with a stiff arm while just standing there)
The sword looks pretty good although its a little blunt looking
Also it could be just how I'm looking at it but his right leg is a little bigger than his left
The face I'm not entirely sure about though, I think you could make it work if he just had a shadow over his eyes or make them more contrasting

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Panthera leo wrote:
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The shield looks a lot better.

I would suggest redoing the shape of the sword entirely as well, it looks like a toothpick rather then the master sword.

I would also suggest putting more foc on Link's arm joints, they are more or less non apperent at the moment.

For the last, I'd suggest re-angling the head so that he looks forward. If you do that, you might wanna try the face again, see if you can work better with a new position.

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Sat Nov 05, 2011 8:58 am
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Yeah, I've heard more or less the same qualms about this sprite, this next update's gonna take a lot of work :x

(Thanks for the help guys, I appreciate it)

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If you have the time I also suggest changing his feet so they're less pointy and more boot-like, I think it would make it look much better. With this in mind try to also make his feet shorter, because right now he has about size 21 boots.

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for some reason, i'm not too pleased with his head or sword
tips anyone?

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Will you be designing the sword? It looks plain and dull.
Also, please add eyes and make the head look more circle-like.


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He needs a nose and ears, pointy ears, make the boots more like well flat on the bottom,and make it more round on the left foot.

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Getting better but that hand is bothering me. Don't know why, just is. And yeah his head is flater than it should be.

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Panthera leo wrote:
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for some reason, i'm not too pleased with his head or sword
tips anyone?

The sword's a lot better, just the face is bad.

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The main problem with the sword is that is isn't straight. You've got four-pixel lines next to two-pixel ones.
Choose a pattern, like two-two-three, (though the same number is preferable) and stick to it throughout.

And I think your old head was better.

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holy crap
major bump

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This time, I've tried to follow some of Suli's tips here (http://ssf2expansions.motionforum.net/t ... n-tutorial), and I think the overall sprite is coming along beautifully. I'm looking towards animation quite soon.

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From my pov, that's a hellova improvement seeing as the first two links on this page are well.. not as good.

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