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Road Hog
Joined: Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:54 pm Posts: 137 Location: no
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Ryuto looks weird, his skin looks off his body looks wrinkly, his hand isn't attached to his arm,his doesn't look that spot on ,in other words make it look more like the anime, and his abs look like flabs of fat.
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 4:01 pm |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
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Make his legs so hes standing straight because that's wayy to awkward looking, his abs are p. mess as well for the second line of muscle don't make it extend to his back. His right arm should end further down the side of his chest, his left arm should end behind the chest. His head should be centered a little better. (Ryuto) Don't be discouraged by all of this, just take your time on your sprites there is no need to rush them out.
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 4:01 pm |
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Road Hog
Joined: Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:54 pm Posts: 137 Location: no
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Oh I didn't even notice the Tsuna good job so far on it
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 4:04 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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alright ill work on it thnx for the cc
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:13 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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are the muscles better,will fix rest later after i get the muscles done
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:56 pm |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
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still really weird, fix everything at once though.
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 11:26 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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alright update* here,made some fixes in his muscles,made the leg straight,moved the head 1-2 pixels our left,and made some minor tweaks in his arms (still fixing them)
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Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:05 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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Don't outline the muscles in that extra color. Use the darkest shade before that to show that it's there, but don't outline it like that. It looks awful when you do that.
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Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:28 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:33 pm |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
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Also when I said straight legs I mean't standing straight, there's no reason for him to be prepared for an attack in that pose.
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Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:19 pm |
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reborn574
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Sun Sep 04, 2011 5:43 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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so yeah still fixing up ryuto (ryuto will be in the next update,maybe tomorrow ill post him) anyway here is yoshina ageha from psyren (made him in my spare time) its currently a w.i.p (yes i know the hands are bad and alot of other things are messed up)
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:37 pm |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
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Just his left arm for now, the legs aren't ideal for his pose but it looks good.
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:43 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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alright thnx for the cc ill fix it.
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:50 pm |
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Suli
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:40 am Posts: 1505 Location: Los Angeles Country:
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MGN Username: Suli
Skype: na_suliboy
Currently Playing: Fire Emblem 1-13, Tales of Xillia/Graces, Smash 4
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The spikes in the hair could be better - I mean, they don't really look that much like his actual hair iirc.
The spikes should raise higher up as they reach the front of his head.
...and as a side note, you like, seriously read all the same series that I do. huh.
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 9:00 pm |
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