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Ryuto looks weird, his skin looks off his body looks wrinkly, his hand isn't attached to his arm,his doesn't look that spot on ,in other words make it look more like the anime, and his abs look like flabs of fat.


Sat Sep 03, 2011 4:01 pm
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Make his legs so hes standing straight because that's wayy to awkward looking, his abs are p. mess as well for the second line of muscle don't make it extend to his back. His right arm should end further down the side of his chest, his left arm should end behind the chest. His head should be centered a little better. (Ryuto) Don't be discouraged by all of this, just take your time on your sprites there is no need to rush them out.

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Oh I didn't even notice the Tsuna good job so far on it


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alright ill work on it thnx for the cc

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Image are the muscles better,will fix rest later after i get the muscles done

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still really weird, fix everything at once though.

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alright Imageupdate* here,made some fixes in his muscles,made the leg straight,moved the head 1-2 pixels our left,and made some minor tweaks in his arms (still fixing them)

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Don't outline the muscles in that extra color. Use the darkest shade before that to show that it's there, but don't outline it like that. It looks awful when you do that.

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Glitch wrote:
Don't outline the muscles in that extra color. Use the darkest shade before that to show that it's there, but don't outline it like that. It looks awful when you do that.

alright ill work on it

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Also when I said straight legs I mean't standing straight, there's no reason for him to be prepared for an attack in that pose.

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Also when I said straight legs I mean't standing straight, there's no reason for him to be prepared for an attack in that pose.

oh,ill fix it then

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so yeah still fixing up ryuto (ryuto will be in the next update,maybe tomorrow ill post him)
anyway here is yoshina ageha from psyren (made him in my spare time) Image its currently a w.i.p (yes i know the hands are bad and alot of other things are messed up)

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Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:37 pm
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Just his left arm for now, the legs aren't ideal for his pose but it looks good.

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Just his left arm for now, the legs aren't ideal for his pose but it looks good.

alright thnx for the cc ill fix it.

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The spikes in the hair could be better - I mean, they don't really look that much like his actual hair iirc.

The spikes should raise higher up as they reach the front of his head.


...and as a side note, you like, seriously read all the same series that I do. huh.

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