Oh yeah, I forgot to say, the shading on the sword currently looks awkward and it doesn't look flat. I'm assuming that it may be fixed after the motion blur is added though. Just thought I'd let you know.

-Tunic extended on some frames
-Shading on sword updated
-Feet in some frames redone
-Sword blur added

-First Post updated

There's still something wrong with the bottom of the tunic =/
I think something along the lines of this would be better.

obviously i'm not the best spriter to showcase it but you know what I mean right?

Wow, Damian, those comics are really good! At first, I thought they were boring and just skipped them, but now I read them and I lol'd at them. Especially at the EPIC Damian and the Roy song xD


P.S. incredibly nice work on Toon Link!

Elementary, my dear Watson.

However, I do think it looks a little too small the way you sprited it, the idea itself is good though, I'm going to try to play around with it a bit.

Hi Dami.

I see that this Toon Link's left leg (from the Toon Link's perspective) is... I don't know how to say it, but not completely shaded? I guess that, if there is no light source hitting that part of the sprite, then it's not bad.

I know that I have to give proper critique, so pardon me on that aspect, bro.

If you mean that it only has a solid colour, then yes it's mean't to be that way - but that random flash of darkness shouldn't be there.

His left leg looks like it's getting larger. Mostly it's just perspective but in the last frame his left leg is completely straight and it looks off. :/

If you look at the shadow, it shows that his leg is actually turning from being on its side to on its toes.

I know it's on his toes. The thing is, his leg is also completely straight, and the pointiness of his foot looks extremely awkward. He should probably have his foot on the ground like this:


I apologize for all the ugly. It was like a 5 minute sketch on the laptop.
I hope you understand what I'm trying to say... :/

That is a good point but fixing it on a such a low res sprite is going to be a challenge, I want to see how Damian pulls this off =]

If he doesn't then he's going to have toon link holding his leg straight out and balancing on the tip of his toe. : /
But I have plenty of confidence in Damian.

Hey Damian, I want some more work on the Incompetence comics.
Anything, I just love your drawing style.

Oh, and Toon Link does not look too bad.
But why don't you post it on the EF?

You're better than me now. Make the sword bounce back when it hits.

Woah, good to see you back around.