Please work on a profile for more than three minutes.

i'll update it later.

Name: Arel

Last name: Orpheon


Gender:male

Race:human

Melon:Light peach


Shirt: red jacket, yellow collar, yellow cuffs, trinity symbol on the left side of his chest.

Pants: denim

Shoes: black sandles


Eyes: brown


Power:fire


Weapon:sword, black handle, blue blade made of crystal


Side: good


Optimism: low


Hobbies:working out, bugging Acen, testing his fire power to it's max


Age: 15

Height: 5'6"

Weight: 120

Size: skinny


Goals: find his mother and destroy Elision


Background: Acen and Arel are two ordinary brothers in A.D. 1243 (Our timeline?), until one night, they wake up in a world far in the future (3012). (Why? Why did they wake up even farther into the future?) Where all ground is red of blood (That doesn't sound quite right.), slaves and monsters (shadumorks) are in every direction (How do they know what a Shadumork is and why are they in every direction? Do they constantly surround people? What do they look like? What are they? How did they come to be?), and the world is country is ruled by the alien, Epis, and the world ruled by the alien lord elision. (What..? An alien rules a country and an alien lord rules the planet? That's... kind of... never mind. Unoriginal.)

So Arel and his brother Acen, must defeat the aliens and shadumorks and free the world from evil, while meeting new people along the way. (Why do they have to save the world? Is it some sort of destiny? Are they compelled to because of morality? Are they just bored of the future?) Kiruke, prince of the land of Askeon (Is this place ruled by aliens, too? If so, how is there still a monarchy set in place? If not, why is there a monarchy set in place? Did we downgrade as a species?), Daciel, the guardian angel sent to protect Acen and Arel along with his wings and mechanical claw (Who sent him? Angels exist, now? And they have claws? Is this a religious story?), and Hep, their father who was supposedly at war in the past, teaching them to use their powers and making sure they stay out of trouble. (How is their father there? How did they find him? How is he still alive? Is there any sort of story, here? This is so broken.)

If there's any hope for Askeon it's Acen and Arel... (It's looking rather bleak, I have to say.)

im still working on it im not done yet.

It's not going to get better, no matter how many times you work on it.

Conspicuously, I beleive that statement.
Get better at storywriting, please.

Conspicuously..? What the hell? You mean curiously? Or strangely?

Anyway, it's true. You'll always be terrible at writing. That is, until you get older and develop a bountiful mind. Hopefully.

Depends on his age.. if he's any older than 12 right now, no hope.

f#%$&, I didn't think of that... if he's not foreign, over the age of twelve, and still typing that badly... then there really is no hope.

Name: Arel You can just put the name together

Last name: Orpheon Frigate Orpheon ftw

Gender:male No problem with that

Race:human ^^^^^

Melon:Light peach wat?

Shirt: red jacket, yellow collar, yellow cuffs, trinity symbol on the left side of his chest. Put it together with appearance

Pants: denim ^^^^^^

Shoes: black sandles ^^^^^^^

Eyes: brown Expected it ^^^^^^^

Power:fire No problem

Weapon:sword, black handle, blue blade made of crystal NP

Side: good NP

Optimism: low NP

Hobbies:working out, bugging Acen, testing his fire power to it's max NP

Age: 15 He looks like a child to me(in your sprites)

Height: 5'6" NP

Weight: 120 NP

Size: skinny Or you mean normal?

Goals: find his mother and destroy Elision NP

Background: Acen and Arel are two ordinary brothers in A.D. 1243, until one night, they wake up in a world far in the future (3012). Where all ground is red of blood, slaves and monsters(shadumorks) are in every direction, and the world is country is ruled by the alien, Epis, and the world ruled by the alien lord elision.

So Arel and his brother Acen, must defeat the aliens and shadumorks and free the world from evil, while meating new people along the way. Kiruke, prince of the land of Askeon, Daciel, the gaurdian angel sent to protect acen and Arel along with his wings and mechanical claw, and Hep, their father who was supposedly at war in the past, teaching them to use their powers and making sure they stay out of trouble.

If there's any hope for Askeon it's Acen and Arel...Pretty short

don't turn 13 'til october, and i'm american.