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Tsu
Joined: Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:54 pm Posts: 1761 Location: Everywhere Country:
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MGN Username: God-sama
Currently Playing: Minecraft, SMBX , Kirby Dreamland thingy.
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Well i will edit the sprite so it could be better..
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Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:13 pm |
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「Breaker」™
Joined: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:51 pm Posts: 895 Country:
Gender: Female
Waifu: Shiori Tsukada
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Sorry Staypuft.
I perfer SUDK's Pheonix Wright over yours. Although, it's hard to tell the contrast in his version.
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Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:36 pm |
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Maniacal Hyena
Joined: Fri Mar 13, 2009 6:19 pm Posts: 821 Location: Hookah Lounge Country:
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Currently Playing: Tekken Tag tournament 2
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am i the only one who doesn't see a sprite ?
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「Breaker」™
Joined: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:51 pm Posts: 895 Country:
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Mon Nov 22, 2010 5:44 pm |
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Maniacal Hyena
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Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:47 pm |
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StayPuft
Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69
Gender: Male
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Ok so I'm gonna bump this because why not Here is something I made today, a sprite of Wreck-It Ralph I'd like some feedback on it I know the shirt lacks shading I'm working on it that patten is harder to shade than it looks (or I just suck Idunno)
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:01 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
Joined: Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:59 pm Posts: 2153 Country:
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Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. Ultimate
Waifu: Mina Ashido
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Amazing! You just need a little work on the hair.
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:08 pm |
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StayPuft
Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69
Gender: Male
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Any specific ways I could do that?
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:22 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
Joined: Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:59 pm Posts: 2153 Country:
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Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. Ultimate
Waifu: Mina Ashido
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Make it look a little messier, like in the movie.
Other WiR characters would be cool.
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 9:34 pm |
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PeachCake
Joined: Sat May 07, 2011 11:35 pm Posts: 463 Location: Canada. Country:
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His legs are a bit off. His far leg turned that way should be bigger, and the close leg should be thinner. c:
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 10:46 pm |
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StayPuft
Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69
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Made the hair a bit messier and messed with the legs a bit. I've gotten complaints about his shoulders so I'm gonna work with them a bit next.
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 11:12 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
Joined: Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:59 pm Posts: 2153 Country:
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Excellent. 5/5
You should try Vanellope, Felix, or Calhoun when your done with Ralph.
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Tue Nov 27, 2012 11:14 pm |
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am Posts: 2081 Location: At home, working and playing
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Those are some pretty dull colors. Brighten them up a bit. Make them colorful. I assume you used a reference which gave you those kind of colors but if you're looking for a better reference, here you go It also kind of feels as if the head is too small compared to the body but thats just my opinion
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Wed Nov 28, 2012 5:21 am |
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StayPuft
Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:35 pm Posts: 69
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Yeah I used a different reference, this one I think: http://www.advancedgraphics.com/store/p ... eneral.jpgSo that explains the palette. But I'll redo the palette, perhaps it'll make shading the shirt easier. That reference you showed also gives me a better idea for the head, so I may work on that as well. I appreciate all the feedback guys, it's helping a lot.
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Wed Nov 28, 2012 8:20 am |
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DJ Wizard Cop
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Joined: Wed Dec 22, 2010 10:38 pm Posts: 425
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Currently Playing: Chaconne
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Definitely needs more contrast. Try putting it to 2 shades per colour to get the shading right, then add the 3rd shade back. Hands need to be more blockish,(especially HIS right hand) and the hair is combed backwards, it never goes forwards. Head is also too far to our right, and he lacks a jaw.
Keep going c:
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Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:18 am |
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