OOC: Yes, I did. but did you read all of MINE?

"Yeesh, no need to be a grump..." The orange haired teen said. The woman with the mace was nowhere in sight, while a common theif snuck up behind Koshindo.

Oh, I didn't even mean to quote that, here's what I meant to quote.I just tried to remind you of Nile's question.

OOC: Yeah, but the man in black motioned for you to follow him, and told you to "come along then", yet you didn't respond in any way.

OOC: Okay, what did I need to fix in my post again?

OOC: You see, these two were created by me, and I know exactly where they are, while you don't. You have no say in where they are, so yeah.

OOC: Okay. Forget that post.

BIC: Kazu noticed Simon walking towards that shop. "Hey, where are you going? You promised you'd help me before the food, remember?" Kazu said.

"Yeah, yeah... Just getting distracted is all..." Simon said, reluctantly leaving the presence of the bakery, and walking in a straight path. "So, they're theives, right?" Simon asked, holding his chin in thought. "I mean, it's not like they would just promise to make you a hero, take you onto a small ship, then attack you for no reason, right?" He concluded, still holding his chin.

Kazu thought..."Well, I think they had a reason, to take all my stuff and kill me because I was a witness, of course. Is that not a good reason?" He asked.

"Well, judging by the whole "take all your stuff" part, then they're theives. We should probably check out all the theif hideaways, starting closest to where you landed after your encounter." Simon said, turning around. "So where'd you land? Would you be able to take me there?" He asked, hands folded across his chest.

"Yeah, sure, it's not to far from here." Kazu walked through the less-steam part of Steamport and tried to remember to where John and James lead him through, and lead Simon through the same route, maybe having missed a path or two.

Koshindo noticed the theif behind and lodge his elbow at him "I've been searching town forever for the box of shards,been robbed two times,got kicked out of a house by a man who was crazy, had to track down some ladie that aperantly won't tell me her name,entered a s**** full of theifs, and ask the guy who stole my money about the box of shards.I've had a crazy day so don't bother me." Koshindo said

OOC: Not descriptive enough, and you did one big thing in one post. That's like saying "RPer One found a rowboat, and told RPer Two about it." "RPer two carefully got into the wooden, easily breakable rowboat, trying his best not to tip it over." "RPer one pushed the rowboat to shore, and went from Lkravos to Lvarkus.", It's not quite... Y'know... supposed to be that fast.

BIC: The man quickly backed off, having been spotted. A drunk man punched someone in the face, and they immediately got into a fistfight, trying at eachother's throats. Another man jumped in, as well as several more, and soon chairs were flying, one going straight at Koshindo.

OOC: Edited...

Koshidno ducked "Ugh... I knew that going here was a bad idea."Koshidno then headed for the exit.

OOC: Better, but the bigger issue here is leaving without giving my character a chance to react, and saying you led him, implying autoing.

BIC: A man in his early twenties randomly made an attempt to tackle Koshindo, obviously in quite the fighting spirit. Judging by his breath, he was also drunk. He had a decent muscular build, too, so it would be fairly hard to block the oncoming attack.