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Flash of Terror - A SSF2 Fan Fiction
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Flash of Terror - A SSF2 Fan Fiction
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No, its not a romance.
Flash of Terror is a story about a terrorist named Wario who terrorizes the world. He has 2 allies: Ness, a orphan who helps Wario because Wario gives him what he needs to survive, and another unnamed character. (Revealed at 1.0) Wario is known for murdering president of Cleod9, Captain Falcon. This series will be a series of comic book pages put together with SSF2 Screenshots. I will edit a few, but it will mostly be untouched screens put together. Page 1  Give tips about the series, as its a W.I.P |
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| Tue Aug 27, 2013 5:36 pm |
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Gender: Male Skype: reXos. Currently Playing: Boi, ffxiv and dbz fighterz. Waifu: am lonely
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this is a comic right
fan fictions don't have pictures in them right right _________________ <~><~><~><~><~><~><~><~><~><~><~><~><~><~> sorry, I only listen to freshest jams from the youngest leans |
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| Tue Aug 27, 2013 6:18 pm |
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 Joined: Sat Mar 30, 2013 7:49 pm Posts: 695 Location: Hoenn Gender: Male MGN Username: Titan Skype: titan.x3 Currently Playing: Tales of Symphonia: Chronicles, Pokemon X/Y, SMBA4: SMB3, SSF2
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Looks good.
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| Tue Aug 27, 2013 7:04 pm |
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make the panels bigger i cant tell whats going on
what is black mage doing _________________  |
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| Tue Aug 27, 2013 7:10 pm |
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Okay. Black mage was a spectator. |
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| Tue Aug 27, 2013 7:13 pm |
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 Joined: Fri Sep 28, 2012 12:02 pm Posts: 1529 Location: the 6th dimension Country: 
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I cant understand what happened
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| Wed Aug 28, 2013 2:22 am |
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1) I can't tell what's happening in those small panels or what order they're in.
2) Panel borders are inconsistent, with two panels having no bottom border at all. 3) There's background stuff around the buster shots in the second-last panel that makes it look bad. 4) Wait, so Ness got shot at and then Mega Man yelled "Fire!"? 5) Dammit I was going to do something like this :< |
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| Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:04 am |
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Thanks for the tips. I was trying to do some kind of action shot but I couldn't fit Megaman in a good area besides there. XD You were gonna make one of these? |
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| Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:07 am |
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Intresting.
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