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Panthera leo is back from the temporarily unconsious 
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Panthera leo
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Post Panthera leo is back from the temporarily unconsious
New stuff incoming dudes

NEVER AGAIN SHALL THIS BE OPENED: show
Welcome one and all to my all new sprite workshop.


I've removed all the old things, I'm starting fresh pretty soon, gonna start from some JUS.
In the meantime, enjoy some Pokemon recolors that I made a long time ago.

I will calmly ask you to stop critiquing like an "ePIc PHAIL n00b", then will ask for your post to be deleted, if you choose to act like an idiot.

Pokemon Recolors

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My first attempt at JUS:
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Pixel-Overs
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Pikachu
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Jigglypuff
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Pichu
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Sprites
Ike, SSBB
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Link, SSBB outfit
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Link in Ocarina of Time/SSB64 styled outfit
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Stages
Untitled Stage:
http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/8294/unledstage.png
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/8294/unledstage.png
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/8294/unledstage.png
http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/8294/unledstage.png
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5230/somethingm.png
Current Look:
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RMS Queen Smash (working title)
http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg52/sca ... res=medium
http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg834/sc ... res=medium
http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4288/r ... stage2.png
Current look:
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READ IT PLEASE: show
Drei wrote:
Since you guys SERIOUSLY need it, it seems...


HOW TO GIVE PROPER CRITIQUE
AND POST ETIQUETTE
1. If someone's sprites are bad, they didn't EPIC FAIL, because that is f#%$& elitist of you to say, and probably wrong. An epic is something LONG. Failure would be total misunderstanding of most or any concepts the person did and objecting they did such concept.
2. A simple sentence saying "bad," "good," "These are good," or any variant is a waste of a post. You should tell them WHAT you like or WHAT you didn't like.
3. Make your post calmly, unless the person is being completely stupid or ignorant.
4. Don't overuse smilies. I actually prefer to not use smilies.
5. Don't compare anyone's sprites to another's. It just makes both people seem like asses.
6. At least SHRINK or delete the text in quotes if you are quoting more than two posts, or if a post has a lot of text. Better yet, get rid of any quotes for posts other than the one you are posting about.
7. Not everyone's first, second, or third language is English. Please don't be a grammar nazi or get mad if they make a lot of grammar errors if you still get the point. But totally raping the language should be fixed.

Seriously.


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This is my first ever sprite. Critique it well.
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I didn't really give it an official name. (Yes I know it S0xzorZ.)

This is the first edit to my first sprite.
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My second sprite, a Marth-head sprite. (Has anyone noticed that Marth has his arms akimbo and is wearing a tiara? I think we should rename him to Martha.)
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Third sprite, Marth's sword, Falchion.
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Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:51 pm
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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
IMO, he looks like he's about to fall back. :/
Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:05 pm
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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
Red wrote:
IMO, he looks like he's about to fall back. :/

and is leaning forward.

Oh, 900 POST.
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Blitz, nobody cares, really, nobody.

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Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:42 pm
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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
Blitz Miscellanea wrote:
Red wrote:
IMO, he looks like he's about to fall back. :/

and is leaning forward.


LOL, that's hilarious actually, I'll get to work on that, thanks for the critique.

Blitz Miscellanea wrote:
Oh, 900 POST.


GJ on 900th post.

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EDIT: I just updated his mega lean forward/lean back problem. Hopefully, it is fixed.
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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
He's still about to fall over.

You can't just swap the legs, you'll need to change the legs AND the torso.

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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
isin't that a dance move when you lean forward and dont fall anyway he's about to fall

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Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:58 pm
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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
|~DVDV~| wrote:
He's still about to fall over.

You can't just swap the legs, you'll need to change the legs AND the torso.

Thanks for the advice, I'm currently working on more Marth sprites, but I could possibly try fixing his torso.

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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
are the pokemon on the left side the ones you made???

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Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:13 pm
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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
sazh chocobo wrote:
are the pokemon on the left side the ones you made???

yeah. those pokemon on the left were from Generation I, updated in the colors of Generation III.

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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
i like them.

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Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:38 pm
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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
Posted my latest "project". I'm attempting to learn JUS style spriting/shading. It's not shaded yet, but I am searching for a JUS shading tutorial, because I've heard that the tutorials on this site are no good. Please critique it. (Remember this is a WIP and it is NOT SHADED YET, so don't tell me to shade it. I know that already)

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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
The chest is kinda puffy on the stomach area.
I suggest editing JUS a while to learn the style. Not all tutorials here are bad. Chaosvii7 had a good jus tutorial. If you Look through the spriters corner a bit you may find a thread called "JUS classroom, no flaming this time" or something to that effect by him. I suggest doing the assignments he put up, and looking through the topic a bit. I believe the tutorial should be in there somewhere.
Just a suggestion, if you want to try to learn JUS from scratch I suppose nobody is stopping you.

EDIT:http://forums.mcleodgaming.com/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=14749&hilit=JUS+classroom
there's the topic if you want it.

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Post Re: Masterp443's all new sprite workshop
While I continue work on my made from scratch JUS sprite, allow me to satiate your taste buds with this pixel-over I did of Pikachu (it's my first ever "successful" pixel over, I've tried it before, but let's just say it didn't go too well).

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I think that you need to put a little more effort and work into your Pokemon recolors/outlines. Mostly the outlines. They don't coordinate with the palette colors. I've made a few custom Pokemon myself, so I've had to actually study how this works. Pokemon sprite outlines and colors go like this... The darkest outline, and the darkest color should go together. This rule also applies for the middle color and the lightest. You want the dark outline to go with the darker areas of the body and vice versa for the lighter parts. Right now it looks like very rushed and poor work. The outlines of black should not be so eye catching. There are a lot of people who do Pokemon sprite revamps, so google those if you have a second.

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