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Shin
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Shin
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 Joined: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:38 pm Posts: 417 Location: In my location 
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Name: Shin
Appearance: Black hair, Long collar coat Abilities: Control blades Background: When he was young a unknown society mark his arm and it was painful for this he some villagers hated him but some did not and in every town he was treated as a evil fighter. For this he wanted revenge. Alliance: Neutral Gender:Boy Age:15 _________________ Adopted by Zesper Will your character evil (c) Kyuubit,Kebin and Me   I hate twelve year olds, made me remove the Spy's exploding head -Curly Brace |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:41 am |
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 Joined: Tue Aug 12, 2008 10:45 am Posts: 4454 Gender: Male Skype: belth666
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... OH MY GOD.
Someone else want to get this one? I think I just lost half my brain cells while reading it. _________________ play league of legends it's a fun game  http://signup.leagueoflegends.com/?ref= ... 7960510125   |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:42 am |
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Joined: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:38 pm Posts: 417 Location: In my location
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I am just an amateur
_________________ Adopted by Zesper Will your character evil (c) Kyuubit,Kebin and Me I hate twelve year olds, made me remove the Spy's exploding head -Curly Brace |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 1:44 am |
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Legendary Ghost  Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:42 am Posts: 12630 Location: Belgium Country: 
Gender: Male Currently Playing: Final Fantasy XI, Left 4 Dead 2
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Where's the "DEAR GOD IT BURNS!" option on the poll?
_________________ Play Smite with me? (It's like LoL or Dota, but less frustrating)  "Jesus promised the end of all wicked people. Odin promised the end of all ice giants. I don't see many ice giants around." |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:45 am |
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Joined: Tue Aug 12, 2008 10:45 am Posts: 4454 Gender: Male Skype: belth666
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Should have edited it :3 _________________ play league of legends it's a fun game http://signup.leagueoflegends.com/?ref= ... 7960510125 |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:05 am |
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Joined: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:38 pm Posts: 417 Location: In my location
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This is just an practice
_________________ Adopted by Zesper Will your character evil (c) Kyuubit,Kebin and Me I hate twelve year olds, made me remove the Spy's exploding head -Curly Brace |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 6:03 am |
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 Joined: Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:22 am Posts: 606
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If it's just a practice, don't put it here.
If it's just a practice, your bad. If it's just a practice, do a 10x better one. If it's just a practice, put a 'Omg this is hell bad' option on the poll. That's my advice. _________________ ಠ_ಠ ๏_๏ ಥ_ಥ |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:27 pm |
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Legendary Ghost  Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:23 pm Posts: 1797 Location: Where angels fear to tread, and man is but a cautionary tale. Gender: Anime Girl
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My advice is if you're going to use this character, make a heavily revised bio if you so choose to have one. Need more information on his abilities, explain what it does and how it works. Background, barely made any sense whatsoever. Revisions are needed just to make those few sentences become understandable. You will need far more information to boot. Detail, Detail, Detail. Appearance is far too vague. Theres no personality presented, no race or species, no description on how he looks like. Don't turn out like Darkfire who stopped entirely because he couldn't take criticism and get better from it. If you want to truly make an "awesome" profile, add as much depth and creativity as possible. Imagine it, Envision it, Create it. |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 12:48 pm |
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 Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:21 pm Posts: 882 Location: Where I am...
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Instead of sitting on the couch watching Saturday Morning Cartoons while creating a bio for a character, take your Goddamn time with it.
_________________ People say I'm depressed and anti-social, but I'm just someone that has actually taken a look at our awful society. |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:00 pm |
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 Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:22 pm Posts: 1561 Location: <3 Melty Blud Gender: Female
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My mind asploded
_________________ spring break go shove it troll |
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| Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:58 pm |
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:05 pm Posts: 1527 Location: (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*♥:・ﾟ✧
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Sheer.
f***. Awesomeness. |
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| Fri Oct 03, 2008 5:34 pm |
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Joined: Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:22 am Posts: 606
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I hope that was sarcasm... >,> _________________ ಠ_ಠ ๏_๏ ಥ_ಥ |
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