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Joat
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:35 am Posts: 858
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*OOC: Good. Two minor details. One, contractions need apostraphes (“There’s”). Second, abbreviations (Like OOC) need to be capitalized. But this is quite a major improvement.*
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Thu Aug 21, 2008 10:26 pm |
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soren410
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:35 am Posts: 325
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OOC: C'mon, then, guys. Let's get this back on track.
The streets were flooded with running and screaming people in panic. Out of the crowd rushed several men carrying weapons. They appeared to be looking around for somebody. One of them spotted Mira hiding in her plant cage and yelled out something to the others. Soon, the six men were beating and stabbing at the cage, trying to get to the girl inside.
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:49 pm |
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Kiki
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:32 am Posts: 7557 Country:
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Instead of doing what they expect she lunged out from underneath the counter and knocked one of the guards down. She didn't look behind her as she ran into the crowd trying to blend in. She felt her heart beating rapidly but she had to use the crowd's panic to her advantage, hopefully she'd find the others. The last thing she would do would be to use her powers and hopefully it wouldn't come to that.
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:11 pm |
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R.P.G.
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:38 pm Posts: 185 Location: in your back yard saveing your soul from beaing devowered by the undead.
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" I shouldn't have left the others like that, but i can't leave my body. Nor can I take it with me......I wonder..?" The elemental grasps one of it's fingers and detaches it. Placing it upon the ground it turns into a miniature earth elemental about seven inches tall. " Go back to the market, find Mira and give this to her." the elemental said forming a small green crystal in his hand and handing it to the miniature one. The miniature elemental nods and dives into the ground.
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:17 pm |
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Kevin
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:49 am Posts: 2944 Location: Alexandria, Virginia Country:
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Currently Playing: playerunknown battlegrounds
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Kevin noticed all the yelling. Hmm...? Wonder what's going on... He thought to himself. Kevin gets up and walks slowly toward the crowd. "W-what's going on?" He asks
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:29 pm |
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J-Corp
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 6:03 pm Posts: 956
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OOC: <Needs something to do.
_________________Adopted by DH and Kiki. Adopted NT, Sargent Frost, Azrael, HBM, SPB, Kevin, Konami, Edgy, SF, SL, and Yoyo. May the path of the hero lead to the Triforce.
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 5:08 pm |
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R.P.G.
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:38 pm Posts: 185 Location: in your back yard saveing your soul from beaing devowered by the undead.
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The miniature elemental pops up in the middle of the stampeding crowd, dodging feet as it looks for Mira. The elemental sees her and begins to run along side her taping her leg and waving trying to get her attention.
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 5:27 pm |
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Pug
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:36 am Posts: 657 Location: Connecticut
Gender: Male
Skype: miscelanonomous
Currently Playing: No games
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OOC: well i missed alot... Am I still in?
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 8:07 pm |
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soren410
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:35 am Posts: 325
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OOC: I suppose so, but Gordo's leaving MG, giving me full control of this RP. If you miss too much, you're out.
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:01 pm |
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Pug
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:36 am Posts: 657 Location: Connecticut
Gender: Male
Skype: miscelanonomous
Currently Playing: No games
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OOC: I won't be on 24/7. I was at Washington D.C. with my grandparents >_>
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Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:46 am |
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soren410
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:35 am Posts: 325
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OOC: Just be sure to tell someone where you're going. Then you'll be fine.
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Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:46 am |
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Belth
Joined: Tue Aug 12, 2008 10:45 am Posts: 4454
Gender: Male
Skype: belth666
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(( Erm, I thought about it, I've missed too much to jump back in. ))
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Sat Aug 23, 2008 11:27 am |
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soren410
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:35 am Posts: 325
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OOC: Maybe it's best that we start over, then? Cap wanted to start over, too.
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Sat Aug 23, 2008 11:42 am |
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Belth
Joined: Tue Aug 12, 2008 10:45 am Posts: 4454
Gender: Male
Skype: belth666
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(( That will most likely kill the RP ))
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Sat Aug 23, 2008 11:43 am |
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soren410
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:35 am Posts: 325
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OOC: Then I'll stick with the original plan.
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Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:05 pm |
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