Glitch's sprite gallery (Something larger than 10 pixels)
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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No progress yet, been extremely busy, but my friend drew a picture of glitch for me She tends to draw faces femenine, but i think she did an amazing job. This is her deviantART, just to help her out. http://typhlosion-kannon.deviantart.com/
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:26 pm |
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Chaosvii7
Joined: Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:58 am Posts: 564 Location: Probably going to Hell.
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Let's use Daddy's Welfare Haphazardly
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The cannon arm is kind of unnatural. It looks like it's just part of her wrist. The sword doesn't have a pommel or it's own part of the arm to itself? It should transition a little better.
But I think it's a good representation.
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:30 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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the lack of transition is due to the fact that the picture i gave her had none. Glitch is male, but like i said, she made the eyes and mouth femenine. And the cannon was supposed to be in place of a hand, like the sword. So in a sense, it is part of the wrist. But yes, good representation.
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:36 pm |
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Chaosvii7
Joined: Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:58 am Posts: 564 Location: Probably going to Hell.
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Currently Playing: Let's use Daddy's Welfare Haphazardly
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Well, then it would be worth it to shorten the sleeves to show the transition from arm to cannon/sword. They can't just attach without problem, there has to be something that connects them into the arm that wires into the rest of the body(a plug or socket maybe).
I tried drawing this really crappy representation of Glitch and what I thought he would/should look like. I feel like the black shirt shouldn't be a shirt. It should be some sort of energy that starts at the base of his arm and runs up his arm, if you know what I mean. I can draw it if need be.
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:06 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Nah. Itll always and forever be a shirt. I think that some time in the future he will have a semi normal left hand, and hold a beam swordish thing in his right, that is attatched to his hand in some way.
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:16 pm |
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Geno
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Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 am Posts: 11709 Country:
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Currently Playing: Undertale
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:53 pm |
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Gold
Joined: Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:10 am Posts: 2601 Location: Australia - Sydney
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ninja Gaiden III
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Out of curiosity, how does he use chopsticks?
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:58 pm |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
Gender: N/A
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:04 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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he doesnt. Hes inhuman. He doesnt eat or sleep. He breaks things, mostly accidentaly, gets mad becasue he thinks that the thing broke on purpose to spite him, and rages. And kills stuff as a result. He doesnt use chopsticks. And no, its a long sleeve shirt. Ive explained above and in the past that the design may change.
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:29 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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So i was bored in my BCIS class, and was ahead on my work, so i decided to do some spriting. I actually started this back when school first started, and just remembered to bring a flash drive and get it home. I was surprised to find that the swing actually animates relatively well. The run... it needs work. ignore it. But its been a long while so i decided id just show this to you people.
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Wed Apr 20, 2011 5:44 pm |
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Kiki
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:32 am Posts: 7557 Country:
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Actually, personally I think the swing is a tad awkward, if what you're attempting to do is a regular bat swing. Frames 3 and 4 need to have the bat at a different angle, the way it is now is as if he is sweeping the floor with the bat. The rest of the frames are good though in that animation.
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Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:59 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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alrighty, ill try and change the angles. The stance itself i find isnt very accurate either, but it seems to work.
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Thu Apr 21, 2011 4:20 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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this one came out a little bit faster :/ may have to slow it down and stuff. I attempted to fix frames 3 and 4, and had to do 5 too because leaving it the way it was made it look awkward. Look better?
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Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:35 pm |
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Kirbyfan42
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:07 pm Posts: 827
Gender: Anime Girl
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I agree with Kiki. The angle is better, bit still looks low and strange.
I think it also needs to be a little more dynamic, to show the force of the swing. The motion leading up to the impact point, and then the motion after do not show enough force.
I shows something closer to a backhand stroke in tennis than swinging a bat.
Perhaps you could start in a more dynamic pose with the bat higher. Then make him take a step forward as he starts to swing the bat at something closer to a horizontal movement (not exactly horizontal, but closer). Seeing as this style doesn't seem to have blur, you should reduce the time of the swing by a frame or two, to show the speed and power. (Maybe at some delay when the bat would potentially hit something to show the force).
These are just suggestions so if you don't like it, than don't take it.
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Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:04 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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sounds good, ill work on adding dynamic to the pose. more anticipation frames is basically what im hearing, and still make the angle a little better, right?
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Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:45 pm |
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