Meh, just doing this to see if I got better at this. Probably didn't. Anywaaaay...
Age: 16
Name: Reymi Gunthra
Hometown: Trilopod (of the "Mecha Rebels" universe)
Appearance: Reymi has long, black hair. Reymi usually runs about in a black jacket, with a broken zipper. (From a fight with a few troops) Thus, she gets cold at nights. She is African American.
Gender: Female
Weapons: Magic (Specializes in fire, and casts it by a certain finger position before announcing the spell. There is a finger posisition for every TYPE of spell.)
Backstory:
Reymi was born into poverty. Not only that, both of her parents had died at 12. She is an orphan, yes, but she has been living off of pickpocketing and stealing. Reymi been learning magic from an forbidden old spell book since she was 6. She had never used it on anyone, but thought it might come in handy at some time. Reymi runs about in Trilopod, and she knows the whole landscape in and out, making her a challenge to arrest. There is a huge bounty on her head, (in which Trek is trying to get, at all costs) which is now making her a "shoot to kill" target. Reymi started her crime spree at 10, but not doing too well, often getting arrested, and thrown into Trilopod's jail. Her cell: 1. Since then, she has been improving on her methods and strategies, heeding the words of other thieves and bandits like her.
Reymi has an absolute obsession with jewlery, and steals them the most. She sells the ones that look horrible to her (most of them) to her club mates of the Thieves of Andread, a club started by well, Andread.
She has tried free-running before on the trees of Trilopod, thinking it would improve her thief skills, but she fails at it.

Still not done. I feel like there is a lot missing to it....

you need a bigger mind

Lol. Well, I'm probably gonna finish it today.

Bump because I need help. I wanna get at least one bio done....

Its a...good(?) start.

I would start adding more details. Eye Color, Height, Weight (because in my mind I'm thinking of some really impoverished people), and just fill some of the massive gaping holes in the backstory.

Although I'm not one to critique someone else's bio, seeing as mine was severely ripped apart, I still hope you take my advice.


EDIT: Describe the City. Right now I'm thinking of a run-down city. Like Winnipeg.

Ah, and I shall take it.
You have helped me remember what I should've added. I have a...slightly poor memory, you see....

It's good. These same people told me what I should do to improve, but just do what you want to do. It doesn't matter whether you you listen to them, or ignore them.

It does if you want to improve, sonny.

And I surely do.