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okay, I see its done It looks pretty cool, but his nails on his right foot look kinda weird
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Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:37 am |
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clubby
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hey, can you upload it to http://www.postimage.org
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Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:47 am |
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Nintendo95
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Fri Aug 30, 2013 1:47 pm |
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clubby
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Bowser's bottom lip is too dark, the thing connecting the spikes to the shell are too bright, and the outlines need to be improved. Better then the sonic sprite, but it can be improved.
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Fri Aug 30, 2013 1:59 pm |
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Nintendo95
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Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:02 pm |
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clubby
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Your sprites are huge o.o Its a nice sprite. Do you take requests?
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Sat Aug 31, 2013 10:39 am |
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Nintendo95
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Sorry I don't take requests.
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Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:00 am |
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Nintendo95
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Can someone comment please? Not so fun making sprites when no one say what they thinks...
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Fri Oct 18, 2013 9:39 am |
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clubby
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There's no point to comment if you don't post more sprites.
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Fri Oct 18, 2013 10:15 am |
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TacThree
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the back foot on bowser looks flat because of the perspective on it, and the front foot looks weird (I think because of the claws going into the floor he is standing on) also, the spikes on bowser's shell seem to be round and not sharp points as a whole like I think they should be.
I think your pikachu looks fine when he's staring right at the viewer, but other than that, he looks really obtuse at the angle you sprited him in... as if he's turned too much toward the viewer and not enough in front of him (although you don't want him facing too much in front of him in order to avoid the flat look that Bowser's back foot has.)
and Sonics spines (the pointy thing coming off of his head) are way too long and make him look like he has some kind of awkward dreadlocks haircut. that, and they are also not sharp and pointy looking like they should be at the ends of them. as a whole, they just look like strange water-filled cones or something lol
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Fri Oct 18, 2013 4:25 pm |
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Nintendo95
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Ok. I will try making the sprites better. Does my DK and Fierce Deity Link look good?
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Sat Oct 19, 2013 4:23 am |
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iliqnpich
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Really like yor sprites.Cant wait to see how the stage looks
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Wed Oct 30, 2013 2:37 am |
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Nintendo95
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Thank you! ^^ This stage gonna take a looong time to finish. This is my 2nd time i remake this stage because iam not happy with the other stage. I want my stage to look almost perfect.
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Wed Oct 30, 2013 6:50 am |
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Steven
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You're coming along very nicely, vän. I really dig the lineart job on your smash stage. The green grassy textures seem kinda repetetive and oddly-placed though, perhaps try to texture the entire grass? Coloured outlines may also benefit your stage.
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Wed Oct 30, 2013 7:44 am |
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Nintendo95
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Yeah I should use coloured outlines insted of black outlines. What do you think of my stage so far?
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