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Tsu
Joined: Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:54 pm Posts: 1761 Location: Everywhere Country:
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Currently Playing: Minecraft, SMBX , Kirby Dreamland thingy.
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She looks like a skeleton, Ok in all seriousness she actually looks like skinny big foot, might Aswell even up the body abit there. Unless she's sopposed to be that tall. And her head doesn't fit too well with the rest of her body.
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 8:33 am |
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Reix
Joined: Sun May 20, 2012 6:55 pm Posts: 914 Country:
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I can make her shorter no problem, but can you elaborate on her head?
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 1:17 pm |
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Tsu
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It requires a bit effort to understand how her face looks like. The necklace makes it look like she has droopy lips at first. And the mouth takes a while to spot.
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:25 pm |
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Reix
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Made her shorter and hopefully made the face more distinguishable.
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 6:12 pm |
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Tsu
Joined: Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:54 pm Posts: 1761 Location: Everywhere Country:
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Maby make the legs a tiny bit more shorter aswell as the upper half.
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:03 pm |
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Reix
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I feel that's stretching into legal dwarf territory...
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:37 pm |
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Suli
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I actually disagree; it doesn't need to be any shorter. The proportions/weight distribution can be toyed with a little, but the height's fine now.
As for distinguishing the features, the biggest problem you have is a severe lack of contrast, so it's hard to make out any shading whatsoever.
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 10:08 pm |
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Reix
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Eh, what else is new? Also shortened the arms because I didn't shrink them with the legs.
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Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:51 am |
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Reix
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I was inspired by my friend up there to do some Trifusions of my own. The ones I chose are people with big, obtrusive armor, specifically Phantom Zelda, Alphonse Elric and Samus in her suit. The first is Allda, or Alphonse and Zelda. Might be a bit too Alphonse, mainly cause of color. Shading feels a bit pillowed as well. All this is in between another traced animation in the works.
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Sat Mar 15, 2014 11:30 pm |
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Shaske
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I think you should make the legs longer
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Sun Mar 16, 2014 12:06 am |
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Reix
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They're one longer, but her boots are shorter. IMO it makes a big difference.
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Sun Mar 16, 2014 12:22 am |
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Reix
Joined: Sun May 20, 2012 6:55 pm Posts: 914 Country:
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Zeldus, or Zelda and Samus. Honestly, I don't my style is proper to the armor kind of thing. I'll finish making these and then maybe try some more humanoid kind of things.
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Tue Mar 18, 2014 12:37 am |
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Tsu
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Take requests?
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Tue Mar 18, 2014 4:11 pm |
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Reix
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I'm open to suggestions. What do you have in mind?
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Tue Mar 18, 2014 8:09 pm |
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Reix
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Elran, the shrimp. Bluh, made it shorter than it should be, but whatevs. Other two are cooler.
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Tue Mar 18, 2014 11:14 pm |
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