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Reix wrote:
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Messed around with an outline I found/shrunk/edited and wound up with this.

She looks like a skeleton,

Ok in all seriousness she actually looks like skinny big foot, might Aswell even up the body abit there. Unless she's sopposed to be that tall. And her head doesn't fit too well with the rest of her body.

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Mr.Yimbo wrote:
Reix wrote:
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Messed around with an outline I found/shrunk/edited and wound up with this.

She looks like a skeleton,

Ok in all seriousness she actually looks like skinny big foot, might Aswell even up the body abit there. Unless she's sopposed to be that tall. And her head doesn't fit too well with the rest of her body.



I can make her shorter no problem, but can you elaborate on her head?

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Sun Mar 09, 2014 1:17 pm
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Reix wrote:
Mr.Yimbo wrote:
Reix wrote:
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Messed around with an outline I found/shrunk/edited and wound up with this.

She looks like a skeleton,

Ok in all seriousness she actually looks like skinny big foot, might Aswell even up the body abit there. Unless she's sopposed to be that tall. And her head doesn't fit too well with the rest of her body.



I can make her shorter no problem, but can you elaborate on her head?


It requires a bit effort to understand how her face looks like. The necklace makes it look like she has droopy lips at first. And the mouth takes a while to spot.

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Lukepi wrote:
read my post in your thread after i locked it.

i'm done. if you send me another PM with a sarcastic s#%$& attitude i'm banning you for 3 days.

go ahead and test me. see what happens.

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Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:25 pm
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Made her shorter and hopefully made the face more distinguishable.

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Maby make the legs a tiny bit more shorter aswell as the upper half. :)

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Lukepi wrote:
read my post in your thread after i locked it.

i'm done. if you send me another PM with a sarcastic s#%$& attitude i'm banning you for 3 days.

go ahead and test me. see what happens.

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Maby make the legs a tiny bit more shorter aswell as the upper half. :)



I feel that's stretching into legal dwarf territory...

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I actually disagree; it doesn't need to be any shorter. The proportions/weight distribution can be toyed with a little, but the height's fine now.

As for distinguishing the features, the biggest problem you have is a severe lack of contrast, so it's hard to make out any shading whatsoever.

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As for distinguishing the features, the biggest problem you have is a severe lack of contrast, so it's hard to make out any shading whatsoever.



Eh, what else is new?

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Also shortened the arms because I didn't shrink them with the legs.

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I was inspired by my friend up there to do some Trifusions of my own.


The ones I chose are people with big, obtrusive armor, specifically Phantom Zelda, Alphonse Elric and Samus in her suit.

The first is Allda, or Alphonse and Zelda.



Might be a bit too Alphonse, mainly cause of color. Shading feels a bit pillowed as well.



All this is in between another traced animation in the works.

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Reix wrote:
Suli wrote:
As for distinguishing the features, the biggest problem you have is a severe lack of contrast, so it's hard to make out any shading whatsoever.



Eh, what else is new?

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Also shortened the arms because I didn't shrink them with the legs.

I think you should make the legs longer

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Shaske wrote:
Reix wrote:
Suli wrote:
As for distinguishing the features, the biggest problem you have is a severe lack of contrast, so it's hard to make out any shading whatsoever.



Eh, what else is new?

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Also shortened the arms because I didn't shrink them with the legs.

I think you should make the legs longer


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They're one longer, but her boots are shorter. IMO it makes a big difference.

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Zeldus, or Zelda and Samus.


Honestly, I don't my style is proper to the armor kind of thing. I'll finish making these and then maybe try some more humanoid kind of things.

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Lukepi wrote:
read my post in your thread after i locked it.

i'm done. if you send me another PM with a sarcastic s#%$& attitude i'm banning you for 3 days.

go ahead and test me. see what happens.

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I'm open to suggestions.

What do you have in mind?

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Elran, the shrimp.


Bluh, made it shorter than it should be, but whatevs. Other two are cooler.

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