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TheRealHeroOfWinds
Joined: Thu Dec 23, 2010 12:16 pm Posts: 1583 Country:
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Hey Shiver-Star, is it ok if I make a few edits and post it here to give you a few pointers?
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Thu Jan 22, 2015 4:53 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Kirb-Star
Waifu: zero suit wario
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Go ahead.
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Thu Jan 22, 2015 4:58 pm |
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TheRealHeroOfWinds
Joined: Thu Dec 23, 2010 12:16 pm Posts: 1583 Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
MGN Username: TheRealHeroOfWinds
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Major Changes - More of a cone shape Longer shirt Minor Changes - Reduced colors Fixed small shading
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Thu Jan 22, 2015 5:03 pm |
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AEM
Joined: Tue Aug 12, 2008 7:54 pm Posts: 293 Location: smashboards Country:
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Skype: Ariand54321
Currently Playing: Smash for
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Well I think the best way to make it seem more like a smock is for it to stop hugging her figure. It's obviously a little big on her, judging from her appearance in Crystal Shards, so try experimenting with making her torso appear a bit more cone-like like she does in the game.
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Thu Jan 22, 2015 5:20 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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Skype: Kirb-Star
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Thanks for the feedback guys! Okay, I realized that the design I am using would DEFINITELY not work for a Smash Game. Let me explain: (sorry for the image's low quality, but I can only take photos with my 3DS) So, I made 2 designs of Adeleine. The 1st one is a redesig for Adeleine I made long ago for a project about a Kirby Flash series. As you can see, that Adeleine is built more like a teen-to-adult woman. Looks good, but would fit a lot more with Skullgirls and not for Smash. The 2nd one is a design I made to look more like her original appearance and mixing Ado's look in Dream Land 3, her clothes look on the shape of cone, but you can still tell apart she's a girl. I tought of staying with this design. That means, I have to do the whole sprite again, in order to fit more with this design. Another note: I made a moveset for Adeleine, which is the one I'm going to use: http://forums.mcleodgaming.com/viewtopic.php?f=96&t=39656&p=1364577#p1364577 Outdated moveset http://forums.mcleodgaming.com/viewtopic.php?f=96&t=39656&p=1365062#p1365062 Moveset with some updates. (This is not the final moveset I'm going to give her) I also wanted to start a project about spriting potential Smash characters. The characters I tought of are: -Adeleine (from Kirby) -King K. Rool (from Donkey Kong) -Lip (Panel de Pon) ------------------------ I want to reddo her sprite now, but I wanted to know your opinion first.
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Sat Jan 24, 2015 6:23 pm |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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Currently Playing: League of Legends, Killing Floor 2, Overwatch
Waifu: Cleod9
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Didnt really read that whole post, just skimmed through it.
However, instead of thinking in terms of, "Would it get accepted into SSF2", I think you should try and do your own thing and learn and develop your own style.
Really liking that first design btw. I dont know too much about the character itself but it's a nice take on the gentle looking nature the original gives off.
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Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:27 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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I suggest you to read it. It has important stuff there.
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Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:54 pm |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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Waifu: Cleod9
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The only important thing in there was that you're starting a smash themed project. But it sounds pretty solid. Do you have any other idea of who you might also sprite?
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Sat Jan 24, 2015 9:15 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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I was refering that I'm gonna have to redo the whole sprite.
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Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:33 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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Here's a W.I.P. version of the new Adeleine: Made a bigger head, shaped her silhouette like a cone. Face and Shoes yet to be added
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Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:53 am |
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Spoon300
Joined: Wed Nov 19, 2014 10:03 am Posts: 24 Country:
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| | | | Shiver-Star wrote: Thanks for the feedback guys! Okay, I realized that the design I am using would DEFINITELY not work for a Smash Game. Let me explain: (sorry for the image's low quality, but I can only take photos with my 3DS) [ Image ] So, I made 2 designs of Adeleine. The 1st one is a redesig for Adeleine I made long ago for a project about a Kirby Flash series. As you can see, that Adeleine is built more like a teen-to-adult woman. Looks good, but would fit a lot more with Skullgirls and not for Smash. The 2nd one is a design I made to look more like her original appearance and mixing Ado's look in Dream Land 3, her clothes look on the shape of cone, but you can still tell apart she's a girl. I tought of staying with this design. That means, I have to do the whole sprite again, in order to fit more with this design. Another note: I made a moveset for Adeleine, which is the one I'm going to use: http://forums.mcleodgaming.com/viewtopic.php?f=96&t=39656&p=1364577#p1364577 Outdated moveset http://forums.mcleodgaming.com/viewtopic.php?f=96&t=39656&p=1365062#p1365062 Moveset with some updates. (This is not the final moveset I'm going to give her) I also wanted to start a project about spriting potential Smash characters. The characters I tought of are: -Adeleine (from Kirby) -King K. Rool (from Donkey Kong) -Lip (Panel de Pon) ------------------------ I want to reddo her sprite now, but I wanted to know your opinion first. | | | | |
I'd love to see the redesigned version!
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Sun Jan 25, 2015 7:13 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
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Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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Looks cute so far. Keep up the good work! ^^
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Sun Jan 25, 2015 7:35 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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Skype: Kirb-Star
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Okay so, while I figure out some moves for Adeleine (which will take awhile) I tought of making trophies just for fun and practice. So, I will start with Master Belch, from Earthbound: Shading is not done yet, but did the whole sprite from scratch. I still haven't made a Trophy Stand sprite yet but I will get into it soon. I tried to start on the shading, but I think it's better to ask the professionals. (As you can see, the lightsource comes from above) If you want to give some tips on the shading by editing my sprite just ask me, okay? Any criticisms?
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Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:29 pm |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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Skype: sazhchocobo
Currently Playing: League of Legends, Killing Floor 2, Overwatch
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Wow that's from scratch? Looks pretty good so far. Keep it up
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Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:40 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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Skype: Kirb-Star
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Thank you! I also made Diamond Dog: I know the shading and even the shape looks kind of messed up, so I wanted to know your opinion. ANy criticisms?
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Mon Jan 26, 2015 9:33 pm |
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