Your character's motivation is ice thin. And that's one of numerous flaws I see. I've left masterful deconstruction to Kyzak.

Shaddap. Please.

This is why you will never get any better.

It's called criticism. Get used to it.

I'll never learn anything if all anyone says is that "it's bad".

thats not what he said, so does that mean you'll learn now?
that would be a mid-October miracle

if you wanted to speak the truth, you should have said

What who said?

Kyzak and Thai actually gave criticism. And you just told them to shut up.

Just tell me what's WRONG with it already!!!
And I don't want any biased bull-$h!t.

Sure, I made mistakes, but I'm tired of people criticizing me without explaining their criticism.
Kyzak, what's wrong with non-human characters?
Werebob, why are my bios bad even for Sonic character bios?
Thai, what were the other flaws you were talking about?
Tyler-robert, what's your advice.
I need help, just like any other n00B.

Well, first of all, stop flaming the other users.
Second, learn to understand how to read their posts. Most of them were pretty self-explanatory.
Ex:



See the difference? INTERPRET, okay? Otherwise, if you continue to post like a n00b and flame everyone, you're going to get banned.
Third, learn how to spell "n00b". It's really getting on my nerves.

I'm just asking questions. And I'm asking forgiveness for all my n00bery in this topic. All I want is some advice.

And they're f*** giving it to you! You're just too f*** thick-headed to get that!

Bad for Sonic characters because:

After the ten f*** millionth sonic character only one in ten f*** million can be "good" for a sonic character, and Neox, Blade, and a few others beat you ten f*** million times over.

My advice? No sonic characters, hell I dare not even post my own character that has a fourty-nine page story about her because she is a sonic character. If they have to be Sonic-like pull a Joat and make it your own race with an elaborate backstory behind it. Just because it isn't a sonic character people will react to it better.

Formula:

(Uniqueness x Literacy + how much people already like you) / godmode and other no-nos by Panda

Others may point out a better way to preform the operation.

Uniqueness * Literacy + Forum's Constant = Success Value

Forum's Constant = Projected Respect + Actual Respect - Projected Disrespect

Also, this was a Sonic character? I don't remember where it was ever mentioned. Still Sonic characters, no, make that, Sonic clones, are unoriginal, require little thought and are generally inferior in quality.

Listen, I have acknowledged any helpful advice and appreciate it, and I'm sorry for covering my @$$ with bull-$h!t. I admit my mistakes, and I'm open to helpful advice now.