It's a bit difficult to get into detail with the black lines and such, because they're so damn close. The face originally had two lines but I had to limit it down to one because they were so damn close and if I didn't put a pixel to separate them, it'd look like one line.

I retried Hitoshura's hair and fixed one of his arms.



Compare?

Can we get a detailed picture of the character in question?

Personally, I think the pants should be shaded differently, with regards of a set light source.

Hito-Shura/Demi-Fiend from Shin Megami Tensei: Nocturne is the character. I can't say I'm very good when it comes to light sources. Any suggestion on where it should be?

Added a poll. Criticism is still welcomed.
(I know I bump this. It's kind of intentional, but that's because I lack replies.)

he not wearing pant more like long shorts. you have to fix the minor details flaw

Oh, wow, I somehow never noticed that despite the fact I have Nocturne. I'll fix that.

The hair needs work imo. You need to add more of a fringe to it and less party at the back. You also have to make his eyes stand out more. they're unnoticeable atm. The 3rd skin tone should have a stronger contrast than the 2nd.

In-game, the dark part of his skin changes shades, however doesn't effect his overall skin tone. I know this may seem like an odd question, but what do you mean by more of a fringe?

After I looked at the reference picture his hair doesnt look that accurate. Mainly because of the sharp point of the hair that comes in on the left part of his face. It also doesn't strike me as accurate because of the hair shading. His hair also looks very...'poofy'. It should be flat almost like a bowl cut except for that part he has sticking up and of course the Bieber fringe.

Wait, are you talking about the retried sprite or the older one?

Retried.

Okay, so I played Nocturne some more and realized how flat his hair really looked. I then realized that I continually mistook his Magatama (Something that gives him abilities) as his hair because they're a really similar shade. That's why he has that point at the back of his head that's not visible in the artwork. I'll fix that.