...anybody? i wanna know if its good or not...

...What? but thanks for the compliment! Umm... You write a manga?

can i join?

name: David Okay. Since I understand that you took the name Kevin at first, f*** you. Stop stealing my name. And also, David. David what? Give him a last name, or make up some s*** about him not having a last name or, something.
Weapons: gum and fists If you're gonna f*** put fists, at least put that he fights with his fists or something. Some idiot like you could easily make the mistake of thinking he carries around fists.
age:12 I most definitely have a problem here. 12? He's 12? I really hope you don't mean 12 f*** years old. Because I don't know ANYONE who's twelve years old that can create gum that can: turn into a f*** fireball, be used as a bungee cord, blow up, or craft weapons. You mentioned nothing about him being a f*** GENIUS.
Appearance: Ness style hat, red T-shirt, blue shorts, normal white socks, black soccer cleats, blue eyes, freckles, and messy blond hair. Get Firefox, or use some kind of spellchecker or something. Stop making stupid spelling mistakes you could very easily avoid. Also, way to look generic. Be more descriptive. How long are the shorts? How tall is he? How much does he weigh? What color is his skin? Try to include these details into your bio. Without them, we've no clue if your character is a fat a**, or a f*** giant.
Bio: His city was destroyed by evil guy, yadayadayada, he swore vengeance an stuff, and created special gum with different properties. If you're not gonna put ANY f*** effort into doing this part, don't do it at all. Oh god, this is even worse than the appearance. First off, 'His city was destroyed (Yes, there's an 'r' in destroyed).' How? By who? When? Why? Where is this city, and what's it's name? 'by evil guy.' What evil guy? What exactly made him evil? Who the hell was he!? Without these details, you're not even giving a background of his life. This is also very generic. Spell vengeance correctly. Also, he created a gum with different properties. How exactly did he create it? At what time in his life did he create it? I already covered this, but HE'S 12, GODDAMN.
types of gum:
bungee: basically just really stretchy.
gun: when spit turns into mini fireball, when blown into bubble is like a bomb.
static: gum that slowly charges electricity, then erupts into a strong attack.
Clay:a few seconds after being spit out it will grow and harden, used to quickly craft weapons.
ice: basically like gun but with ice.
Spell basically right. I don't understand a couple of things here. First off, how does the bubble become a bomb, and why the f*** would you want it to when it's still in your mouth? Think about what you're writing carefully. Don't really understand what the strong attack is for static either.

He will probably get more types later, but not all attacks are listed... it was just an example of what the gum can do. Will he craft more? How will he get more?

Edit: oops. didnt realise the name kevin was taken...

Zak felt a blow of wind against his shoulder. "Crazy..." He said. He continued walking when his phone rang. He answered it. "Hello?" He said. It turned out to be his friend James. "Hey dude. What's up? ...... Oh man......Okay. Bye." James said that he needed help because there was a creature going around burning stuff.

Jaques threw hit bat at mr. watlove. (he didnt like the ring to water lover)

Don't tell me, put it into your f#%$& bio.

Jaques screw his bat again.


(My descriptions are amazing)

OOC: @Kyzak: You forgot about Mikeweak's ED pic from when he hacked us?

Kayla smiles without turning around.

"I can hear what you're doing behind me. Stop it, or suffer the consequences of battle." She says. "Don't make me turn around."

Mikeweak's ED pic from when he hacked us?

implying that pre-teen f***** can hack