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Hey this is the first time I've ever sprited and i'd love some feedback. I know some of you guys are good and I'm trying to b that good, too. so, tell me what you guys think!

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just made a human sprite only animated his idle so far here it is.
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Mon Feb 02, 2015 12:18 am
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The LineArt looks good
But the animation doesn't.

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Lisnovski wrote:
The LineArt looks good
But the animation doesn't.


Tell him how he could fix it maybe?

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Mon Feb 02, 2015 2:45 pm
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The Talking Pig wrote:
Hey this is the first time I've ever sprited and i'd love some feedback. I know some of you guys are good and I'm trying to b that good, too. so, tell me what you guys think!

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just made a human sprite only animated his idle so far here it is.
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hmm..
well its pretty good! for the idle you might wanna put 2 shoulder movements, & then blinking instead of one.

The running... is weird.. you might wanna fix the arms and legs, the problem with the arms is he's punching the air..
you might wanna fix it to punching a little less when running
and the legs look like they're bouncing off of eachother, they kinda look like scissors, I don't see any problems with the Attacking animation.

the soldier animation is good, but you might wanna make it so that his shoulders are still moving when giving the thumbs up.
But that's what I think..

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Mon Feb 02, 2015 7:10 pm

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Remember when animating sprites to have everything moving at the same time, and not just the arms/legs. I'd say before you start animating, make some still sprites. There are a lot of tutorials for beginners that you could look at. However for a first start I'd say it's not bad!


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Sorry i haven't been posting i thank all of you for the advice and just know i'll be posting more now.


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