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I haven't played as Mario in a while then :3
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Nintendo95
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| | | | Clubby the bear wrote: | | | | Nintendo95 wrote: [ Image ] What do you think? I will make a better one soon... Here is it. [ Image ] Better now? | | | | |
... You are making these in paint, right? Cause if you C+P these into a editing program, (the one in your sig) has the background as the one from the forums, instead of a transparent background. | | | | |
Iam using Paint.NET
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Thu Aug 08, 2013 6:38 am |
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am Posts: 2081 Location: At home, working and playing
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-It's saved in a .JPG format. Save it as .PNG format next time (Let's get that out of the way, shall we?)
-Don't enlarge the sprite unless you post it in it's original size so that it helps give honest critique. I can barely tell of the quality because i can't see how the colors/shading forms up to it's original counterpart.
-The styles on every part of the sprite are mixed. You got outlines on the spikes, the gloves and the top part of the shoes. You then got this sort of blended style on the legs and on the shoes that don't match the style of the sprite at all
-The right glove doesn't match the position of Sonic. When it's behind the body, there should be no outline for the glove between the body and the glove. Adding a full outline around it confirms that the glove is above the body and that it's fully view-able. It doesn't match with the view of the character.
-I see an unnecessary and hard-to-see outline near Sonic's eye.
-Too many colors of blue, gray, and red. Some of them look like they are better off being removed from the color palette of the sprite.
-Spikes are gradient shaded. Bad technique there.
-Gloves and the top part of the shoes should be white, Not gray.
-Spikes aren't as 'spiky' and 'sharp' as you would say.
-Way too many jagged lines
Can you at least post the sprite in it's original 100% view without zooming in so we can see what it actually looks like in it's original state?
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Thu Aug 08, 2013 11:05 am |
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Nintendo95
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_________________- ̗̀My Pikachu will show you the fastest way DOWN! ̖́-competitive ssf2 ruined ssf2..
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Thu Aug 08, 2013 11:52 am |
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am Posts: 2081 Location: At home, working and playing
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That's still zoomed in. Do you have the original size of the sprite or do you not? Example of what i'm talking about:Top left is the original size of these sprites. The ones on the bottom are zoomed in.
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Thu Aug 08, 2013 12:08 pm |
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Nintendo95
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_________________- ̗̀My Pikachu will show you the fastest way DOWN! ̖́-competitive ssf2 ruined ssf2..
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utubeuser807
Joined: Sun Aug 19, 2012 9:28 am Posts: 186 Country:
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Whats your deviantart, if you have one?
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