I meant grammer and punction and detail wise!

BALTH KNOES GRAMMA. HE PASSED HI SKOOL FIZIKS.

Well then, I want to see when the time comes!

Edit sig to say stepfather plz. Also, I will be a judge. (I treat evehwun farelie.)

There, I've updated/improved the background a little!

I meant list me as your stepfather plz.

There! It's 2:30, Where's Belth?

Name: Belthazar

Race: Demon

Weapon: Athame

Age: 24

Appearance: Dark brown hair, brown eyes. Belthazar keeps his athame hidden up his sleeve, as a result, he wears a long sleeved black shirt. He has a green pendant, made from jade, which is kept around his neck. The pendant doesn't appear to have any special abilities, but he keeps it on anyway, as a "memorial." Belthazar wears a pair of blue jeans. His shoes are black, and his socks too low to be seen are white. His left shoe has an "X" on the inner side, and his right shoe has an "O" on the outer side.

Background:


Belthazar was raised in a suburb, away from most people. The town was a very small community. The town itself has less than one thousand people living in it. Belthazar is a part of the towns security, being in the army for several years. He had quickly went up in rank.


It all started when he was 19, and there was an emergency in the town. The army was called in to stop an invasion, but they didn't have enough men. Belthazar, being a demon, was able to count for several men himself. as others in the town helped the so called "army."


The town was attacked by several trolls. However, the town being as small as it was had not enough men to defend against such creatures. Belthazar had no fear of death, and thus didn't mind risking his own life for somebody else who deserved to live more than him.


Since then, Belthazar has continued to do countless tasks, and rise up in the army. He has only recently started wielding the athame.


NOTE: I was going to put more, but it's nearly 5AM and I REALLY need some sleep.

Almost 5 o'clock?! Aww well......I will enjoy this hat *Takes a bite of hat* Hey that's pretty good!

I think he just wanted an excuse to eat a hat...

For the record, I've made most of my bios and posts during the middle of the night...

Except the one I made for you, rite?

Well some people can't make theirs as good or add more if they're tired!



Is basically how I felt but at 3 rather than 5.

I could have made more, I have no problem with staying awake.


But since all I was trying to do was outdo you and prove a point, the point was proven, more wasn't needed.

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