I UNDERSTOOD THAT REFERENCE

The shading on the pecs is quite banded, and I don't think the big single colour shadow directly left of the nose should be there.
I'm not sure I 100% agree with your palette choices either. Seems like you use a lot of highlight shades and notalot of shadow shades.
If you used less of the former and more of the latter, I think the piece would look more unified.
Don't think the black line art should be more than a pixel thick ever. It creates jaggies in certain areas, like the right arm.
Oh, speaking of the right arm, I think it should be higher. Looks mildly dislocated right now.

Over all it really is nice but it doesn't feel... clean.

Adjusting arm position and certain shaded areas on the head as we typ. Will upload later. Also editing the lineart on the left sides of the chest a bit to make the readability better.

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Funny and cool

Author's Note; the name 'TheHomosexual Sunflower' was coined by my friend. It's inside fun 's all, don't mind it too much.

Author's Note 2; No comments on Thor's lineart please. Unless you think it's really pressing.

Let's talk tony before Cap. Move the head a pixel or two back. You've always been good with lineart, I give you that. But maybe you can use some selout on it. Also, the light source on the body's shading should come from his triangle piece and don't outline that piece lol. The hands are uneven as they should be conveying the same pose.

Cap is just off balanced and the shield is weirdly shaded (doesn't seem to have volume) and what's with his face lol

EDIT: Post this on TSR and TIGSource (YES I AM INVITING YOU TO JOIN TIGSOURCE)

Dat Thor



Zilch, turning Damian into a meme since 2010

-Shading
-Structure, anatomy

I'll pinpoint those two down as 'points of improvement. I'll implant said suggestions/remarks into the sprites, then post them on TIGsource/tSR. First of all I'm going to check both sites (and more) for tutorials on the aforementioned points of improvement (as well as research) and build it up from where I usually go into the errors.

On the topic of Selective Outlining; it's definetly something I always consider when starting up projects, but when I work with completely back outlines (for comic book/manga looks) like now, I don't see it as neccesary. Is that even possible (if so, I think it'd be worth giving a shot)? I do want to use it more in possible future pieces though.

The rest of the comment was really insightfull, and I will be making sure to weed out the problems. Thanks for your, once more, comments, suggestions and remark. You're making this section more fun for me (applies to other people who shared their toughts as well)., and thanks for the invitation. I already signed up.

I don't even do the shat you do like make circles for heads and make skeletons I just go to sprite it directly. Just try the selout I'm pretty sure it'll look good (this is only good for static sprites mostly) And btw, I don't really suggest 0,0,0 black for outlines and 255,255,255 whites. Try not to use the maximums because they read badly on different computers. Maybe increase the contrast on the colors as well? (btw try to hue shift the gold, naturally gold hue shifts to purple but experiment on this) (you know what, hue shift the red too)

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HI FIVE!

*hi-five's Damian* YEAH!

Wait... that wasn't for me... was it?

The hand wasn't ment to hifive towards your general direction I'm affraid, but my aim might have been off.

Oh well, as long as someone's day has been made, the purpose of the Hi Five is served.

Even though I already made a 'great' Hawkeye, here's another one. Still having some irks with the eyes, but I'm working as hard as I can to fix that. Also check it out, it actually has some slight form of selout (very rough still though, but feel free to share your thoughts) (not with the actual outline-outline though).

@Medevenx: I'm still having some troubles with the Cap's shield; mainly the volume, still. Could you give me some pointers on how to fix that?

when i get home. and show us your other hawkeye (no pun intended)

shouldn't the H like, stand out of the helmet/mask. or is this Ultimate?