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The first character I ever made.
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The first character I ever made.
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 Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:02 pm Posts: 7283 Location: Australia Country: 
Gender: Male MGN Username: Tid Currently Playing: Deep™ The™ Game™ 
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-deleted by me-
Last edited by Tid on Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:27 am, edited 1 time in total. |
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| Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:44 pm |
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Joined: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:16 pm Posts: 12685 Country: 
Gender: Male Waifu: I'm married
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It has a few holes in it, like "why did the government allow the alien to live with them instead of studying him", but other than that it's average.
_________________ Meow ／l、 ﾞ（ﾟ､ ｡ ７ l、ﾞ ~ヽ じしf_, )ノ |
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| Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:39 pm |
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Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:02 pm Posts: 7283 Location: Australia Country:
Gender: Male MGN Username: Tid Currently Playing: Deep™ The™ Game™
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Oh yeah... I might fix that up later. And btw, good average or bad average? |
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| Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:04 am |
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Joined: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:16 pm Posts: 12685 Country:
Gender: Male Waifu: I'm married
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Just... Medium-quality.
There's nothing particularly bad about it, but it's nothing special, either. _________________ Meow ／l、 ﾞ（ﾟ､ ｡ ７ l、ﾞ ~ヽ じしf_, )ノ |
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| Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:36 am |
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 Joined: Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:03 pm Posts: 2825 Location: being a genius Gender: little girl Country: 
Gender: Anime Girl
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so it shouldn't exist? |
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| Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:55 pm |
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Joined: Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:16 pm Posts: 12685 Country:
Gender: Male Waifu: I'm married
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Um... Sure. _________________ Meow ／l、 ﾞ（ﾟ､ ｡ ７ l、ﾞ ~ヽ じしf_, )ノ |
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| Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:41 pm |
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Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:02 pm Posts: 7283 Location: Australia Country:
Gender: Male MGN Username: Tid Currently Playing: Deep™ The™ Game™
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What? It's not spectacular, but it doesn't deserve deletion.. |
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| Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:59 pm |
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 Joined: Fri Sep 19, 2008 11:37 pm Posts: 295 Location: [Away] Country: 
Gender: Male Currently Playing: Team Fortress 2, Osu!, FTL, Cortex Command, Hearthstone
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I think it's because you failed to find a way to properly convey what a concept means in the bio. I've been looking at this at SMDC's old forum, and I've come to that conclusion. If you looks at experts-in-the-field-of-rpcharactermaking, such as Blue or Nini, they organize it as such that either they add more of their personal thoughts into describing things, or they remain completely anonymous, making it look like it has nothing to do with them. Your method employs more of a juvenile theme (or maybe it's your avatar I'm looking at, too much), and I'm not comfortable with the way you place "nowadays" in the end.
*gasps for air* _________________  |
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| Fri Jul 24, 2009 10:15 pm |
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 Joined: Sat May 30, 2009 10:06 pm Posts: 32 Location: Wouldn't you like to know? Gender: Male
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It's alright Tid. Nice to see you trying.
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| Tue Oct 06, 2009 2:27 am |
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Site Moderator  Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:53 pm Posts: 2110 Country: 
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Please, look at the date before posting. _________________  |
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 Joined: Thu Nov 06, 2008 11:11 pm Posts: 530 Gender: Male
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Good job. _________________  |
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