Ok, Ill make an edit later, Im going to start some sprites later

Update: OC update:

Looks like pillow shading on the shirt, and the outline is wayy too bright. The shoes look weird, and the eyebrows seem too bushy compared to the old version. I guess his Scarf is blowing back, but that'd mean his arm would be covering it. The angle is strange, and the hat's lighting is bad.

What angle?

The head is at a top down view, but his feet seem to be at a 2d angle

So, what should I do with his pose?

By fixing the problems that I mentioned...

Ok, I'll make a V3 later, now Im focusing on practicing shading

Update with a new OC:

I really like how adorable your characters are. Most people tend to try to make the edgiest, most hard core OCs in the world but yours have a lot of charm to them. Not a lot of people have that, so kudos.

Wow, thanks a lot!
I have a lot of OC´s, but most of them are drawings, maybe some day I´ll post them, but not in this section (maybe...)

As geno said, the design is pretty good, but it could use some work sprite-wise;
1. His arms seem too short, maybe make them a bit longer
2. there shouldn't be a shine in his hair
3. Unless that's the zipper, I think you should remove the line on his pants. If it's a zipper, then make it a bit brighter

1. I'll keep an eye on that for a later update
2. Why not?
3. That's not a zipper sooo... yeah, I'll remove it.

Oh, well normally hair shouldn't have a shine like that, so I think it should be on the top part of his hair that's sticking up. Of course, unless he has hair gel.

Quick update: