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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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whats noodled?
also, how is it stange?
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| Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:46 am |
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Da Beast
Joined: Thu Sep 25, 2008 7:03 pm
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Location: Some were banging a girl...
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Im guessing he meens skiny/slick.
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dmon600
Joined: Tue Sep 09, 2008 6:21 pm
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Location: the world that never was
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No, it looks to unatural, because his elbow, compared to his hand is un portioned, and it's to slick.
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| Wed Nov 11, 2009 2:44 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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by slick do you mean thin, or that its shaded wierdly and looks like shiny? because that arm is big...
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| Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:39 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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Major bump here... Okay so i stopped spriting, and started again by trying to finish an old project, so.  C+C?
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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Okay so ive decided to attempt re-shading my jedi since he had no definite light source. Old one on top, new one on the bottom. Also, which looks better, lightsaber in his left hand or his right hand?  C+C? Please?
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Arel
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country: 
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MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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Our left his right.
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| Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:11 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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Thank you. Any C+C? Hows my shading/pallette choice? Its been a while. :/
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Arel
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Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
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Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
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Well, the green used in his eyes are way to bright and the face, no offense, is really bad; the forehead is an akward color, the mouth is to simple for the shading style you're trying to pull off, and the chin has no outline which makes it blend in with his shirt.
Besides that there's only a few minor flaws with the anatomy, and the shading on his sleeves.
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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the akward forhead color was supposed to be hair. :/ alrighty ill try to work on the head. What needs work on the sleeves with the shading, specifically? EDIT:  alright i made his eye color darker, and edited the skin pallette. I dont know how id do a mouth though... Getting better?
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Tid
Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:02 pm Posts: 7283 Location: Australia Country: 
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Currently Playing: Deep™ The™ Game™
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Needs better outlines.
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| Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:25 am |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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How would i go about improving the outlines?
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| Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:51 am |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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 Made a battle pose. C+C?
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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I noticed that the lower body looked very thick compared to the original, so i thinned it out. I also made the ruffles in the skirty-thingy less defined, and lightened the right(our left) leg. C+C? Please? I want to improve, but wont be able to if nobody gives criticism... 
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am
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I edited his right foot a bit so it looked more like the foot was pointing foreward and not off to the left of the screen.  Would someone please give me some C+C...?
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