I tried my best to edit, so you think this is okay?

Story:
On the first year where time first spun, the universes were linked together. These universes were divided by their element. The elements were to determine what would happen to you next. However, an evil force from the unknown stood up and split these universes and the links. They terrorized every single part of the universes and enslaved them, at their command from their leader. Decrescendo. This was about to last for more than a century. Until a hero stood up and faced this force. This hero was Maosung. Both Decrescendo and Maosung fought to the death. And Maosung was victorious. The universes were free at last. However, the universes could no longer be connected.

Currently, this is the year 2000. The shrine of our great hero Maosung stands in your homeland. This was where the rumor started. There was a rumor in your homeland about a strange hidden door that leads to a completely different universe. But no one is sure if this rumor is true. Some say whoever finds this door can never come back to your homeland ever again. This is because the ones who were looking for this hidden door in their homeland never came back. You seem to be interested in this rumor. You try to investigate in your homeland about this rumor.....

Registration:
Name: (What is your character's name?)
Race: (Is this a human or a creature like a fox?)
Gender: (Male or Female?)
Weapon: (Nothing powerful, just basic)
Class: (What class is this character? Warrior?)
Age: (How old is this character?)
Personality: (How does your character act?)
Homeland: (What kind is it? Temperate forest? The frozen tundra?)
Background Story: (What's the story behind this character?)

Rules:
1: No god modding.
2: Don't control other characters or the storyline. I will try to make this fair.
3: Poison, Paralysis, and other status problems are fine, but however, you have to make sure they're not cheap. I will make this system fair as well.
4: Just have fun.

Er... Do you think I made the registration a bit too specific?

Yeah it is good.

Kevin Re-likes.

Alright. I'll re-post this.