TerminX's Spriteworks (Trollbean won State competition!)
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As heartfelt as that was No Im having CANgasms right now Maybe when they end kk? ♠
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Chaosvii7
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moar liek "CANustral periods" amirite Ok, I'll wait.
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Oh come on you guys I thought they looked cool..
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Fri May 01, 2009 4:19 pm |
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Glitch
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Though it probably doesn't mean much from me, they are BA! Ok, is tansy on the left, or right?
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Tid
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On the right. Duh. Everyone here knows transy was the red one. But I can't think of a new name... I always sucked with names...
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I got one! how bout Red (short and simple)
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Copy'n'Paste
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Term
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lolololol I love it when other people respond the exact way I was going to :p
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Sat May 02, 2009 8:48 am |
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Shounic
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Wow, A&A, seriously, EPIC FAIL.
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hey! i'm just throwin out some ideas here
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Sat May 02, 2009 9:24 am |
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Curly Brace
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Shiras? Hehehe...
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Sat May 02, 2009 11:18 am |
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Shounic
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I'll start on the one on the left known as Conco. His legs seem to be too skinny and the crotch is far too high for a normal human. his body is shaded in a way that he has six pack, correct? You don't seem to be doing the outline correct and you should probably make the space bigger so you can add more detail. The left arm is too much skinner compared to the other one, in fact, it looks like how a granny's arm would look like. it looks fragile. And the anatomy on the right arm is completely off. The arm is oversized in comparison with the arm, the bones on his hand is broken? and his wrist is too weirdly shaped. The jacket IMO should be wider on both sides, the look on his face makes him look like a hobo, and the eyes should be smaller. And his hair needs some touchups on the shading. And the right one known as Transy. Again as said, the crotch is too high, but the legs and arms in fact sprited some what correctly IMO. The hands need a LOT more shading and i mean both of them, and you need better "blood marks" (I think) because it really doesn't fit him and ruins the sprite.
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Sat May 02, 2009 6:22 pm |
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| | | | Shounic wrote: I'll start on the one on the left known as Conco. His legs seem to be too skinny and the crotch is far too high for a normal human. his body is shaded in a way that he has six pack, correct? You don't seem to be doing the outline correct and you should probably make the space bigger so you can add more detail. The left arm is too much skinner compared to the other one, in fact, it looks like how a granny's arm would look like. it looks fragile. And the anatomy on the right arm is completely off. The arm is oversized in comparison with the arm, the bones on his hand is broken? and his wrist is too weirdly shaped. The jacket IMO should be wider on both sides, the look on his face makes him look like a hobo, and the eyes should be smaller. And his hair needs some touchups on the shading. And the right one known as Transy. Again as said, the crotch is too high, but the legs and arms in fact sprited some what correctly IMO. The hands need a LOT more shading and i mean both of them, and you need better "blood marks" (I think) because it really doesn't fit him and ruins the sprite. | | | | |
90% of what you just commented on was unedited from the original sprite. Are you arguing with JUS? EDIT: Your argument is invalid. Stop trying to be Evilagram. Also, the "Blood marks" are a sign of his race. Whose name I have forgotten atm but whatever
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Sun May 03, 2009 9:23 am |
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Evilagram
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A good tip from someone high and mighty (Jason Manley anyone?) is to avoid copying off other artists or you'll repeat their mistakes. Meaning that if JUS screws up, fix it. loljosephjoestar.
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Arel
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evilagram has only been on the forums for a week and has already won like 5 times
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Sun May 03, 2009 1:52 pm |
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