It needs easing in and easing out, right now at the end it just stop as if it jsut hit a block of wood.

Very nice. *Applauds*

The black shirt outline with the grey hair outline doesn't work though. Face turning could be smoother, and swords don't really move like that (curent motion is better suited for axes, and even then it's iffy) and the twisty foot at the end is really bizarre.

Overall much improved though.

Tried fixing the stuff you suggested.



Probably a BS reason, but it's not just a sword slash. He's firing a projectile, and the behind the back frames are supposed to be the charging frames. I added a few effects to show what I mean.

Regardless of whether or not it's a projectile, if the sword is swung in a 180° angle, there still needs to be some type of motion blur to it.

I like your style, do you take requests?

Uh-oh

Joshua, did you make it your life's work to follow Keyblade wherever he goes and make witty comments about almost all of his posts?

Sorry about that.
He told me that I have to act like his follower....

That is NOT true.

This is gonna be my last post here,
WHAT?!

Get back on topic.

If Reix doesn't reply, then assume he doesn't want to do requests.

He hasn't been on since I asked. Just sayin'

This is looking ok. The right foot is to stationary, and you need more frames. You don't have to add a strong slash effect but it highly recommended to speed up the process. I think you might get an old school animation charm to it without the heavy slash.

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I need to learn to make fire...


Anyway, no, I'm not taking requests.


And now why I posted:


Legs look a little weird, but that's how they were supposed to go. If I knew how, the wings would be flashed.

The reason they look weird is because they're perfectly symmetrical. Try and make one knee upwards or something.