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miniova
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 2:52 am Posts: 64 Location: Yay almost 100 posts. oh umm... in my chair?
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The new stuff looks pretty good. The lineart is alright but you need to work on your shading. The shading is pillowed on all of those sprites. Try picking a direction for the light to come from and work from there. Also about the animated sprite, it looks like he's just wiggling his torso back and forth. It'd look a little bit better if the lower half of his body had a little more movement because right now it looks like he's trying to get out of a straight-jacket.
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am Posts: 2081 Location: At home, working and playing
Gender: Male
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Gone back to spriting a little bit. Here's my sprite of Bomberman: How is it?
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Thu May 23, 2013 1:58 am |
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DJ Wizard Cop
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Joined: Wed Dec 22, 2010 10:38 pm Posts: 425
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Chaconne
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I believe his head is stretched too far on the vertical axis. Try shrinking it down a bit.
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Thu May 23, 2013 12:11 pm |
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Joined: Fri Apr 19, 2013 12:12 am Posts: 27
Gender: Anime Girl
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His head is a little off proportion. But I would just make it a little wider, because the height seems to match the body but the width seems off. Overall a really good effort, Michael.
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Sat May 25, 2013 1:33 pm |
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clubby
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For some reason the head kinda bugs me because it is kinda too low.. thats it with that one. On bomberman the head is too tall and not wide enough
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Sat May 25, 2013 1:39 pm |
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utubeuser807
Joined: Sun Aug 19, 2012 9:28 am Posts: 186 Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Super Smash Flash 2
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I love them all, wish I had the talent like you! Bombermans head is okay, its just too tall. Make it a bit wider and shrink it a bit.
Can you give me some tips? Like how do you first start off your sprites?
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Sat Jun 29, 2013 4:53 pm |
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am Posts: 2081 Location: At home, working and playing
Gender: Male
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Sat Sep 21, 2013 6:29 am |
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clubby
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I love that first sprite.
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Sat Sep 21, 2013 8:14 am |
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♠ Ace ♠
Joined: Wed Oct 05, 2011 3:39 pm Posts: 223 Location: The world.
Gender: Male
Skype: KrayKrayDabouken
Currently Playing: Something I enjoy.
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Exceptional work here. I like it, you're on the right track.
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Tue Sep 24, 2013 4:45 pm |
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Reix
Joined: Sun May 20, 2012 6:55 pm Posts: 914 Country:
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The animated ones and big red are nothing really to look at, but I like the rest.
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Tue Sep 24, 2013 6:03 pm |
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Michael
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:47 am Posts: 2081 Location: At home, working and playing
Gender: Male
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Not sure whether to post it because of minor notices i found but i decided to post it anyway. Here you go:
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Tue Oct 08, 2013 5:18 pm |
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Pochiman
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Joined: Wed Jan 30, 2013 12:59 pm Posts: 5860 Location: dont bully Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
MGN Username: Pochi
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Stitch?...no, it's not him, lol.
Anyways, it looks nice!
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Tue Oct 08, 2013 6:13 pm |
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