This is my RP Character. I'm still working on him.

Name: Jack Daemon

Age: 17

Appearance: Black hair, brown eyes, and a scar just under the eye. 5 1/2 feet tall. Black Jacket, white shirt, and blue jeans. Has a brownish skin color.

Personality: Average intellegince, he has always been intersested in philosophy. He is mostly silent, and a bit ignorant. All he wants is to live in peace.

Biography: When Jack was a kid, he saw his own parents get killed before his eyes. He ran away like a coward from the killer. After years of being pushed around and bullied by other people, he decided to take Kendo lessons and became skilled with the sword. He is also skilled in martial arts. He travels around as a mercenary, trying to find a way to get along with life. He takes jobs to make money.

NO! NO! NO! NO!

YOU'RE NOT READY YET!

Do you even know Kendo? How can you make your character learn Kendo, if you, yourself, don't know about it? Sorry if you do, and I'm aware that I have no right to be posting this.....

I'm not done teaching him yet!

Be easy on him!

All you did was ask him to make a profile.

Pay attention to the bolded.

Anyway, it's an okay start for a character bio, now you just need to build upon it and give it some meaty filling.
And if Zesper is teaching you, it'll be easy.

Nuh Uh.
Zesper's okay. I'm surprised he decided to teach you anyways.
Is Zesper getting soft?
Erm...
Name & Age: No comment available
Appearance: I need some casual attire. Maybe add in his skin color, whatever he carries around, and anything else worth describing.
Personality: It's ok, but perhaps you could add in a bit more, make more "fuller"
Biography: Well, it's third person... thats nice. Could you add in a story in which he could "launch off" with? Why wasn't he killed along with his parents? Does he have replacement parents? Methinks needs to be much longer.

'Course, Zesper's probably teaching you this and much more.

His sword skills had to come from somewhere, and that's what kinda came to mind at the moment. I wanted him to have a sword, because I actually have a real sword on my room wall.(It's only a decoration.)
Oh, and does your RP char have to be like you? Because if it does, that basically defeats the entire purpose of my character.

You don't have to do Kendo, but you have to know about it.

You don't make a character part in an army based on the real world if you don't know anything about the real thing. It's common sense.

Yes, I do know about Kendo. So it's OK right?

Yeah, that should be fine, then.

Yes. I'm just saying you need to know the basics, so your char seems to have appropriate reactions, not saying that it needs to be like you, but when it comes to something as finicky as a martial art, you just want to make sure that he's not doing Kung-Fu when you said he knows Kendo, does that make sense? It's alright.

The only part I found remotely creative.