Author |
Message |
Ayaiken
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm Posts: 219 Location: under your bed ... Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Ayaiken
Currently Playing: DMC 3
|
hello guys i want to show you some of my sprites here is my geno spriteesheet (thanks to crimsonangel because i edited some of his sprites) (it do still needs lots of work) (feel free to edit it and use it for anything you want jus give credit ) vaati :3 kurono kirito and i gave velmont a new outfit and here is my custom skull kid new one ->
_________________
Last edited by Ayaiken on Thu May 09, 2013 11:06 pm, edited 6 times in total.
|
Sat Apr 13, 2013 4:01 pm |
|
|
BluePikmin11R
Joined: Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:11 pm Posts: 1593 Location: Springdale Country:
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: SSF2
|
I like the sprites a lot.
_________________Vote for who you want to see in SSF2 (2016 Edition): http://goo.gl/UmTgcP
|
Sat Apr 13, 2013 4:03 pm |
|
|
Steven
Site Moderator
Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
Gender: Male
Waifu: ElvisDitto
|
It's 'back throw' not 'bag throw' Personally I find the Geno sprites too similair to the other sheet (the one AEM used), to the point where stuff like the cape in the run appears almost recoloured. I also find the moveset questionable but I ain't not no expert. Skull Kid is really cool, but did you Wind Waker-ify (long arms small legs) him on purpose? I also think that Tatl's (/Tael's?) wings should be rounded.
|
Sat Apr 13, 2013 5:22 pm |
|
|
Ayaiken
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm Posts: 219 Location: under your bed ... Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Ayaiken
Currently Playing: DMC 3
|
i edited crimsoms run and walk because i suck terribly at doing runs and walks ,but ill try to make a custom run and walk soon and my geno moveset is kind of based on marios dk geno for brawl nad i always though skull kid had long arms D: look
_________________
|
Sat Apr 13, 2013 5:28 pm |
|
|
Steven
Site Moderator
Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
Gender: Male
Waifu: ElvisDitto
|
Actually you're right. It may just be that the lower legs are kinda small on second look. God, I should Majora's Mask again.
Enfin, shine on I'd say. I always enjoy your sprites.
But for future reference, you may just want to bump your old topic(s?) instead of making new ones when you come back to MG. It's not really against the rules or anything and given the nature of the enviroment we find ourselves in we're not pressed for space either, but if anything it will give people a better sense of your progression as a pixel artist.
|
Sat Apr 13, 2013 5:32 pm |
|
|
Ayaiken
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm Posts: 219 Location: under your bed ... Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Ayaiken
Currently Playing: DMC 3
|
i thought that bumping my old topics was against the rules D: i should re read theme and you are right the legs from my skull kids are too short D: ill remake theme gracias amigo (haha didnt know you could speak spanish) EDIT: here is skull kid fixed and my new deoxys (idle WIP)
_________________
|
Sat Apr 13, 2013 5:47 pm |
|
|
Steven
Site Moderator
Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
Gender: Male
Waifu: ElvisDitto
|
I can't actually speak spanish though haha. And bumping sprite topics is not against the rules if you are updating them. As for deoxys; I love the pallet, but I think it clashes a bit with the outline. The main thing that caught me eyes is that, overall, the shapes should be a lot rounder. The Attack Forme is very slim. While I believe you got the lower body down just right, the upper body looks a bit squished. Where is his neck, for example? I believe this is something you can improve on. Personally, I think the motion within the idle could also use some bells and jingles. Right now he just kind of breathes and moves his arm in a Wario-eque manner, I believe you could aim to make it something a little more gracefull (but then again I don't know generation 3 for my life. What the hell is a Zigzagoon?).
|
Sun Apr 14, 2013 3:38 am |
|
|
Ayaiken
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm Posts: 219 Location: under your bed ... Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Ayaiken
Currently Playing: DMC 3
|
what about now? should i keep ot with 4 tentaculs or one arm and two tentacools?
_________________
|
Sun Apr 14, 2013 8:47 am |
|
|
Steven
Site Moderator
Joined: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:13 pm Posts: 7252 Country:
Gender: Male
Waifu: ElvisDitto
|
Tried to trace over your outline to better show what I mean; On the left is the outline of your most recent Deoxys, the middle are the changes I made over your outline, and the right is the results.
|
Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:29 am |
|
|
Ayaiken
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm Posts: 219 Location: under your bed ... Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Ayaiken
Currently Playing: DMC 3
|
ok here is deoxys with those outlines which one looks better one or two?
_________________
|
Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:54 pm |
|
|
GamingGryffindor
Joined: Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:59 pm Posts: 2153 Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. Ultimate
Waifu: Mina Ashido
|
Are any of these for Crusade by chance?
_________________"Remember, believing in yourself is your magic."
|
Mon Apr 15, 2013 9:56 pm |
|
|
Ayaiken
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm Posts: 219 Location: under your bed ... Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Ayaiken
Currently Playing: DMC 3
|
for super smash bros crusade?? they have their own geno (crimson angel one) and they arent using deoxys a a character
_________________
|
Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:05 pm |
|
|
GamingGryffindor
Joined: Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:59 pm Posts: 2153 Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. Ultimate
Waifu: Mina Ashido
|
Well, for one thing they are looking for new Geno sprites, and youre moveset looks really similar to theirs. 2nd, deoxys is gonna be an official DLC character Skull Kid is also likely to be official DLC I know all this because I'm part to the team over there, BR member and Stage spriter.
_________________"Remember, believing in yourself is your magic."
|
Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:06 pm |
|
|
Ayaiken
Joined: Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:09 pm Posts: 219 Location: under your bed ... Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Ayaiken
Currently Playing: DMC 3
|
afdssfsa ill check that
_________________
|
Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:11 pm |
|
|
DettaDoodle
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:18 am Posts: 899 Location: drowning in pixels and waifus
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Detta
Waifu: Zinnia
|
nobody ever said we were looking for new geno sprites
wtf
|
Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:16 pm |
|
|