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				 VoltFlash 
				
				
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						I'm getting back into spriting so here is what I made for practice.  http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3702 ... yturvy.pngGo easy  on me but I do expect a lot of criticism, more stages soon.    Update: If it's not showing in the link abouve try it here:  http://postimage.org/image/lwpvwt94x/ 
					
						
					
  
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				 Sazh 
				
				
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						It looks as if you copy and pasted a bunch of sprites you found online and the parts that you did actually sprite yourself need tremendous work. Mostly detail and shading. 
					
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			| Sat Jan 19, 2013 1:48 pm | 
			
				
					 
					
					 
				
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				 VoltFlash 
				
				
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						Yeah most of the sprites I used to develop the stage were from The Spriters Resource. Remember I said this was practice so detail and shading wasn't that important to me when developing the stage. I appreciate the feedback though.    I am gonna be practicing for a while just to see the quality of the work that I publish.  
					
						
					
  
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			| Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:01 pm | 
			
				
					 
					
					 
				
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				 Sazh 
				
				
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						I'd work on detail most if I were you. Anyone can make a stage without detail. 
					
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				 Steven 
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						I don't understand how something is 'practise' if you basically don't do it yourself. For what it's worth, the layout is pretty cool though.  
					
						
					
  
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			| Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:05 pm | 
			
				
					 
					
					 
				
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				 VoltFlash 
				
				
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						Well on the stage what do you think needs more detail so I can make note of this?    
					
						
					
  
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			| Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:05 pm | 
			
				
					 
					
					 
				
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				 VoltFlash 
				
				
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						Aren't some of the stages on SSF2 not made by entirely by one person, don't some of you get parts like what I did?  
					
						
					
  
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						Used to, but modern developers do everything themselves.  
					
						
					
  
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			| Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:10 pm | 
			
				
					 
					
					 
				
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				 VoltFlash 
				
				
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						Ok, noted thank you for your feedback.     
					
						
					
  
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				 Sazh 
				
				
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						Specifically, that yellow area... What exactly is it supposed to be. Sand? The wizard of Oz's yellow brick road? Overall, every needs detail. 
					
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