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VoltFlash
Joined: Sun Dec 09, 2012 9:09 pm Posts: 5 Location: The Future
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Currently Playing: Black Ops 2
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I'm getting back into spriting so here is what I made for practice. http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3702 ... yturvy.pngGo easy on me but I do expect a lot of criticism, more stages soon. Update: If it's not showing in the link abouve try it here: http://postimage.org/image/lwpvwt94x/
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Fri Jan 18, 2013 10:30 pm |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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It looks as if you copy and pasted a bunch of sprites you found online and the parts that you did actually sprite yourself need tremendous work. Mostly detail and shading.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 1:48 pm |
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VoltFlash
Joined: Sun Dec 09, 2012 9:09 pm Posts: 5 Location: The Future
Gender: Male
Skype: VoltFlash
Currently Playing: Black Ops 2
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Yeah most of the sprites I used to develop the stage were from The Spriters Resource. Remember I said this was practice so detail and shading wasn't that important to me when developing the stage. I appreciate the feedback though. I am gonna be practicing for a while just to see the quality of the work that I publish.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:01 pm |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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I'd work on detail most if I were you. Anyone can make a stage without detail.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:03 pm |
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Steven
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I don't understand how something is 'practise' if you basically don't do it yourself. For what it's worth, the layout is pretty cool though.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:05 pm |
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VoltFlash
Joined: Sun Dec 09, 2012 9:09 pm Posts: 5 Location: The Future
Gender: Male
Skype: VoltFlash
Currently Playing: Black Ops 2
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Well on the stage what do you think needs more detail so I can make note of this?
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:05 pm |
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VoltFlash
Joined: Sun Dec 09, 2012 9:09 pm Posts: 5 Location: The Future
Gender: Male
Skype: VoltFlash
Currently Playing: Black Ops 2
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Aren't some of the stages on SSF2 not made by entirely by one person, don't some of you get parts like what I did?
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:09 pm |
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Steven
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Used to, but modern developers do everything themselves.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:10 pm |
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VoltFlash
Joined: Sun Dec 09, 2012 9:09 pm Posts: 5 Location: The Future
Gender: Male
Skype: VoltFlash
Currently Playing: Black Ops 2
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Ok, noted thank you for your feedback.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:12 pm |
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Sazh
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:39 pm Posts: 1451 Location: Enjoying Life Country:
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Currently Playing: League of Legends, Killing Floor 2, Overwatch
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Specifically, that yellow area... What exactly is it supposed to be. Sand? The wizard of Oz's yellow brick road? Overall, every needs detail.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:48 pm |
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