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Nicko
Joined: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 am Posts: 1310 Location: someplace where the kangaroos run wild Country:
Gender: Male
Waifu: your dad
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This guy reminds me of someone... Oh yeah! The old me! I wasn't able to take s*** from people like Vii and proton, I was all like "OH NO YOU DIDN'T" And I got so pissed at them for saying spriting was s***, (Even though it was back then) Now it's good and I can also take critz, Oh, and Mr. Arel, if you do what you just did to me to other members (Especially Vii) You will get nowhere with you're spriting.
Just a tip alright?
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Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:47 pm |
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Cactus
Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2008 5:47 am Posts: 3035 Location: It was I, YOU! Country:
Gender: Female
Skype: Doesn't matter anymore
Currently Playing: SFV-FI: Shenanigans
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You. Are. Allowed. To. Do. That. In. Your. Own. Sprite. Topic.
Last edited by Cactus on Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Jun 12, 2011 10:55 pm |
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Nicko
Joined: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:01 am Posts: 1310 Location: someplace where the kangaroos run wild Country:
Gender: Male
Waifu: your dad
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It. Doesn't. Say. That. Anywhere. In. The. Rules. And. If. You. Are. Reffering. To. This. Rule. It. Says. Only. For. An. Update. He. Wasn't. Updating. He. Was. Posting. To. Get. People. To. Post.
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Sun Jun 12, 2011 11:03 pm |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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But nothing you said was good critisicm. You never explained to me how to fix the sprites. Also you have to be an experienced spriter, so yeah.
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Mon Jun 13, 2011 7:50 am |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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UPDATE: I fixed the lighting and details on the face.
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Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:38 am |
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Geno
Site Admin
Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:32 am Posts: 11709 Country:
Gender: Anime Girl
Currently Playing: Undertale
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Mmm, that looks much better. Great job.
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Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:06 am |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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Any more suggestions to fix it up?
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Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:48 am |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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UPDATE: Two new Characters: Farmer, and the Love Interest (haven't thought of a name yet) C+C
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Sat Jun 18, 2011 10:45 pm |
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luckycrime
Joined: Wed Mar 09, 2011 2:49 pm Posts: 457
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ball Breaker with your sister. it's a real game...
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| | | | Mr. Arel wrote: UPDATE: Two new Characters: Farmer, and the Love Interest (haven't thought of a name yet) [ Image ] C+C | | | | |
Ironic isn't it. you made the girl hands look like crap I made a thread to make better hands for sprite character and no one responed. will this cycle continue of making sprite character hands look bad. is the face, body, arms, legs, and feet people pay attention to. that last 5% percent is whats missing with sprites here. sorry for the rant. farmer john shading is off, the hand on the girl look bad, and she need more detail because of the head.
_________________ As cold and empty as space. This is who I am.
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Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:48 pm |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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I looked at that tutorial. They didn't look good.
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Sun Jun 19, 2011 7:55 am |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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Update: I noticed the love interest didn't match the style so I redid her. C+C
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Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:58 pm |
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Cactus
Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2008 5:47 am Posts: 3035 Location: It was I, YOU! Country:
Gender: Female
Skype: Doesn't matter anymore
Currently Playing: SFV-FI: Shenanigans
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What is with her face?
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Wed Jul 06, 2011 11:26 pm |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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You tell me.
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Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:21 am |
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DJ Wizard Cop
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Joined: Wed Dec 22, 2010 10:38 pm Posts: 425
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Chaconne
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The long strands of hair on the sides are bending forward, which is only correct if either 1) there is wind, but it only affects those strands, 2) those strands are affected by some type of reverse gravity, or 3) there is a balloon full of static electricity in front of her. I suppose the one on the left is bent because of the shoulder, but even then the curve isn't quite right.
Her right shoe is off. It should be pointing forward, judging from the position the knee is in.
I'd consider adding a shade of highlight on the shirt too. Although it's not in the style, I feel that the sprites become quite flat after the shadows.
These are really quite impressive though. Looking forward to more work.
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Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:57 am |
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Arel
Site Moderator
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:19 pm Posts: 4040 Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Arel
Skype: ArelAAA
Currently Playing: Super Smash Bros. for Wii U
Waifu: Jesus of Nazareth
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Thank you for the C+C. Fixed the stuff that was wrong, plus added a new character.
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Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:37 pm |
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