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War P. Anda
Joined: Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:05 pm Posts: 1503 Location: in your heart all along
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But I have no idea if it's good enough... I don't want to release it till it's good, and to do that i'll need some C&C.
The following message was copied and pasted from a PM to UnexpectedLight with slight changes:
Nah, it's a rather basic story, but I want to make it sound epic so people will actually join... It's basically that almost everyone is corrupt, and the world is in such a bad state that a group of people made an orginazation- the phoenix remedy- to stop the corruption. You can be evil or good, you can even die. You can be any creature you want as long as it is recognized in mythology or human, and I deem it not cheap. Oh, and save for maybe a really skilled RPer your character must be intelligent (By this I mean no being a cat, you can be somebody with the intelligence of the Hulk for all I care, but don't be an animal for crying out loud!). If you join the Phoenix Remedy you can make a magic- or maybe not- weapon. You may betray the Phoenix Remedy or not, your choice. Everyone in the Phoenix Remedy is in a two to four person group, each group gets different tasks. A while after completing one task your team recieves another one via magic mailboxes located in your team's rooms that are in the main building. Each team has a leader, a leader is whoever scores best for his team during missions. Locations are added depending on where you go for missions. Thats all I got so far, but it allows for an on-going story that never has to end. Oh, and sometimes several teams go on a mission at once. Also, the game is set in Urban Fantasy until further notice.
Think thats about good enough?
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Green Mage
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...Okay, so is this like Urban Fantasy or something?
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 12:22 am |
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War P. Anda
Joined: Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:05 pm Posts: 1503 Location: in your heart all along
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Meh, more of a Midevil Fantasy... Unless they're the same thing...
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 8:59 am |
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So why are there apartments and mailboxes in a medieval setting?
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Belth
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 4:18 pm |
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War P. Anda
Joined: Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:05 pm Posts: 1503 Location: in your heart all along
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Not really apartments, I meant rooms. I'll change that. And the mailboxes are magical, and called mailboxes due to lack of a better word.
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 4:32 pm |
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A Cat
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:22 pm Posts: 1561 Location: <3 Melty Blud
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ever hear of Ancient Rome sayo? That was before the medieval ages, yet it had those "advanced technologies".
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 7:47 pm |
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Doromac
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Honestly, if you were to develop this further and give a deeper presentation of the world and the RP, it could be something. I don't think a medieval setting would be good for this though. When I read it, it sounded like an Urban Fantasy, like Green Mage said.
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:48 pm |
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A Cat
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Urban Fantasy = Later FF?
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:59 pm |
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Doromac
Joined: Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:01 pm Posts: 271 Location: Partyin ALL NIGHT LONG!!!!!
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>.> You killed this. f*** it.
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Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:01 am |
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A Cat
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Doromac
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I don't even care. When I think about it, that's what I associate this idea with (FF7 to be specific). *rage*
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Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:13 am |
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A Cat
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I was thinking more like Tactics, but whatever.
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Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:18 am |
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Doromac
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Tactics... OK. That's a lot better. Yeah.Tactics is a good comparison to the world I'm thinking of now.
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War P. Anda
Joined: Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:05 pm Posts: 1503 Location: in your heart all along
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Too bad i've never played FF.
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