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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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Hi guys! I have a question: Would it be good to back to editing again? I was considering doing that or holding off a little longer to study more. I made this base wire frame, but I'm not sure that It will help:  I know it's not technically a sprite, but getting some opinions on this will be nice.
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Wed Nov 27, 2013 6:37 pm |
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Reix
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I'd try making smaller sprites. Then work your way up a bit in size. IMO you're past the editing stage.
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Wed Nov 27, 2013 9:56 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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MGN Username: SageHarpuiaJDJ
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Currently Playing: The game of Life
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 Decided to try Pixel Art for a change. Obviously not finished, but I'm having troubles with the mouth and eye.
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Sun Dec 08, 2013 10:46 pm |
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Auraka
Joined: Mon Jan 10, 2011 11:31 am Posts: 1955 Location: Netherlands
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hmm this looks so weird haha shape of the head looks really off i'd advice to look more at other pixel art faces and use a few as example's
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Mon Dec 09, 2013 4:48 am |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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Currently Playing: The game of Life
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After looking at it a little more I see where I fugded up at. I'll look around a little more.
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Mon Dec 09, 2013 5:42 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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I'm almost done with this, but I think that it's good enough to show.  When I'm done with this, It's going to be the new Base Sprite for Lux. I think that the arms are the most confusing thing to shade. I may also have to change the lightest black to another purple.
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Wed Dec 11, 2013 10:47 am |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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 Finished it, but before I put in the development thread, is there anything that I should fix?
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Wed Dec 11, 2013 4:13 pm |
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Reix
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I really like the legs, but their way to thick from the knee up. The breasts need to be a bit rounder, and with less shading underneath, as in not dark purple. Hands could probably be bigger, and the right foot would probably look better if it was facing a bit to the right. Hair looks weird with so much contrast. Try light gray rather than blackish.
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Wed Dec 11, 2013 7:33 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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After 17 days of trial and error, I actually managed to finish a sprite:  Her name is Ayami. She's going to be a character in the second Acts of Violence game. Yeah she kinda looks like Blue Mary meets Elastagirl, but I like how it came out, well except the hands. I hate the hands, so they aren't shaded until I can figure out what to do with them. Original Drawing:  Scaled down base: 
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Tue Dec 31, 2013 10:05 am |
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clubby
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The toes should be extended a bit, unless that's what you were trying to do
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Tue Dec 31, 2013 10:07 am |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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That was the intention. I just had trouble because the way the foot was in my reference.
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Tue Dec 31, 2013 4:26 pm |
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Reix
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Torso's a bit short, and her legs make her look like Chun Li's torso was stuck onto Zangief's legs. I'd recommend making them shorter and thinner.
For the hands, either experiment with other hand poses or look more at the original sprite you got right there.
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Tue Dec 31, 2013 4:32 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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I think that I'm just going to make the legs a bit smaller to fix the torso issue. That will also fix the issue with the thinkness of the legs as well, I think. I wanted to make the pants look baggy, but maybe thinning them out a bit will help.
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Tue Dec 31, 2013 4:47 pm |
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That One Sage
Joined: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:01 pm Posts: 1787 Location: Drawing for grades! Country:
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Currently Playing: The game of Life
Waifu: Beruka from Fates
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 Haven't gotten to the hands yet, but I think the things mentioned looks better now.
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Tue Dec 31, 2013 7:59 pm |
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Reix
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Still a bit tall, but a definite improvement. Also, it might be wrong, but can you make the lighter part of the shading on the left leg a bit lower? I think it might look the knee a bit better.
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Wed Jan 01, 2014 12:20 am |
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