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GamingGryffindor
Joined: Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:59 pm Posts: 2153 Country:
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I made these for SSB Crusade, and they are WIP, but I figured i'd show them off here. Tell me what you think! (From Wreck-It Ralph, Fix-It Felix, Jr.) (from 3DS, Swapnote) (from Klonoa, Breezegale)
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:49 pm |
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Kirb-Star
Joined: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:15 pm Posts: 6217 Location: Leafless Canada Country:
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I would say the first one is the Best. The Klonoa one, doesn't have good perspective. I suggest you to see a guide.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:03 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
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ummm.... ok 1) it is nowhere near finished 2) the crusade devs and members say its perspective Is good but thank you! Come again!
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:06 pm |
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Geno
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I have to agree, the third one has a lot of room for improvement. I could critique it for you if you'd like. Or if you're still working on it I can wait. Whatever you want haha.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:09 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
Joined: Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:59 pm Posts: 2153 Country:
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you can critique, and I would also really like some critique on the swapnote one. Thanks!
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:10 pm |
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Kirb-Star
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Hmmmm... The bridge have the same perspective as the House, and the House's shadow goes to the wrong direction. But, I believe that you can do it better, so I'll be waiting.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:17 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
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LOL, its a windmill, not a house
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:19 pm |
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Geno
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It still needs to have depth.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:22 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
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How depth to it? I know I'm a bad spriter.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:26 pm |
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Kirb-Star
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Nah, you are no Bad Spriter, you just need to improve, In fact you started much better than Me so... Good Luck at Working at Sprites.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:29 pm |
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Kiddragon
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Yeah, huh, except if that windmill is paper-thin, there should be ground behind it.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 8:06 pm |
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BluePikmin11R
Joined: Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:11 pm Posts: 1593 Location: Springdale Country:
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Try learning about perspective. It might help.
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Mon Apr 08, 2013 9:09 pm |
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miniova
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 2:52 am Posts: 64 Location: Yay almost 100 posts. oh umm... in my chair?
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By giving it depth they mean try to make it not look like a cardboard cutout. One thing I will say is that you definitely need to change the way the lighting on the Klonoa stage is coming from. With the way you have it now, it will clash very harshly with any sprites placed on the stage. What I'd recommend is first setting up the perspective of the ground correctly. Use this to learn about 1 point perspective. It'll make it look a lot better. http://www.olejarz.com/arted/perspective/
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Tue Apr 09, 2013 1:13 am |
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ElvisDitto
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Flipnote has no substance. It's literally four boxes and a flat colour background. Add some shading to the green parts. Be creative, make it look like it's actually a stage, and not so flat.
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Thu Apr 11, 2013 5:27 pm |
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GamingGryffindor
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But the point is it is supposed to be flat. It's kinda like Flat zone or Pictochat.
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Sun Apr 14, 2013 4:42 pm |
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