EDIT: Bluargh bluargh bluargh

You won't want to read that long post.

So, yeah, if I said anything wrong tell me, I may make questions here too.

I'll try to skip the grade I'm into right now by making a level test, anytime soon.

"definitively, I didn't know this one, but I googled it, and I won't forget "chose" is the right form"
you mean definitely
and for the last one, you would say "...that it only lasted a moment" or "... that it only lasted (for) a short (amount of) time"

Well well, I'd never thought there would be someone else like me in that regard somewhere out there.

Uncle + Aunt = Relatives

Also, the last one may be correct, I don't know, but it sure as hell doesn't sound right. Try something like "we spent so much time organizing it and it was over quickly"

First lesson: use hasten, not fasten, when saying you want to speed something up.

Also:

"... we spent so much time organizing it and ended up not lasting very long."

That's how I would've worded it.

Fasten means to tighten something. For example:
I sat down in the car and fastened my seat-belt.

ooh s*** i misread it
you're supposed to use but

But what?

Also, wrote yesterday, before the internet went down:
Wow, I didn't expect all those posts so fastly.
Thank you guys.

FOR THE "LAST SHORT" SENTENCE, ya'll made good wordings, but that wasn't exactly what I meant (you didn't read the text, so you couldn't know), it was like, I feel upset at the end of a party, because it is usually a waste of time (well, for me, most things we do are a waste of time...), since it is hard to organize, we get tired and it doesn't last long.

@God (Belth, perhaps?)
I was going to write that, but suddenly I wasn't competely sure anymore, and I went by the one whom sounded better for me.

@Blue (the gay ninja hedgehog whose name is arrow) + Tid
Ok, fasten is like the opposite of loosen, then? Didn't know that, I usually say speed/sped up, but I think it didn't fit well there... gonna try to remember.

@DVDV
Isn't "relatives" KIND OF a synonym of family, like, the people in your family, kinship?
Also, boyfriend + girlfriend? Like, "-- Are they siblings? -- No, they are _______", can I use "valentines"? Well, if there isn't an other option, simply boyfriend and girlfriend, but it is a bit long to my lazy tongue...

My composition by the way, if you don't mind reading it, the theme was like "write about your most memorable birthday party as if it was a blog", it is a bit messed up because I really didn't know what to say, but I know she would analyze my skill with the language and not my ability as a writer, or if my ideas were "clear". It was written in all caps, so I may have capitalized something wrong...
Here:

*Self ing*

Fastly isn't a word. You should use quickly.
Wow, I didn't expect all those posts so quickly.

There's no commonly used specific term that can refer to an aunt and uncle that doesn't refer to another member of your family.

You could use relative, however like domestic violence said it's not really specific

wow what grade are you in? that paragraph was horrible
i should just tell you everything thats wrong with it



my english aint perfect, but wow you are bad

It's the 4th semester guy, calm down, I could be beyond that, but I want to get every bit of experience I can by now, so that is why I want to learn a bit more, to feel more prepared whenever I do the leveling test.

The composition isn't supposed to test your writing skills (but my English vocabulary, spelling, grammar and whatever-we-learned-to-talk-about-skills, eg. propositions of motion, food, past participles), I SAID it sucks in that point, I really didn't know what to do, because I REALLY don't remember about my birthday parties (my memory is a bit confuse, while I can remember some things clearly, I forget most of the recent happenings), and I CAN write much better, and it is the raw text I wrote in the class, with just the minimal corrections.
I wish I could show you what I wrote in the text "that I wasn't supposed to know yet", and that surprised my teacher, but I gotta go to school. Thanks for the tips anyway, some might be useful

@tid
thanks

Someone needs a crash course in Essay Writing 101 and it ain't me.