Name: Yumi Nanaho
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Race: Succubus
Appearance:
Backstory:
When she was just born she was a twin, but the evil twin of the two. when she was only 1 they found out there was something wrong with her... her eyes turned yellow. Whenever she was cut it would heal.. there was something really out of the ordinary about her other then that though. When she was 13 years old she had found a new boyfriend. It was all good until she found a sword, which held the power that made her a full succubus. The Shiriashi. She then killed her boyfriend, and took the power of all the gold he had. Her parents had to release her... because she was wanted. She then lived a life of her own.
Weapons:
The Shiriashi - VERY powerful, but very slow. It has the ability to turn into a rope and grab people.
Sayuri Claws - Fast and dipped in poison. Not so powerful, but can paralyze a person for a couple minutes.
Michiyo - Electrified hammer that can pack a punch but can also shock the user.

You back story is riddled with spelling and grammatical errors and the premise is utterly cliche and horrible. There are no descriptions and the entire character should be scrapped.

ok it's pretty old from like 2005 from a dif forum any way.