Allow me to introduce a reviewer that does not even read the story and creates a review based on generalizations made by other reviews.

"this story is awful. how did you post this? it is so inappropriate. a little sex is okay but having a chapter called f*** is gross. bad spelling and grammar by the way. and i have no clue why you stole a character and called one of the people who read this garbage gay so i agree with with the anonymous reader "to". either remove the story and fix the spelling and grammar or remove it altogether. you would be doing us all a huge favor. in the words of a good friend of mine nex ut cestri litterae. Death to awful literature."

I thought people actually read stuff in it's entirety before reviewing it.

There was this Ace Combat fic that I thought was pretty cool and I'm not even sure I found it on there. No sex in it either unless you consider describing fighter jet combat as sex.

All the time I have been on the internet I have only seen people around the age of 12 acting like idiots.

I did not know people over the age of 19 could be so retarded.

That's surprising?



Anyway, what's the fic anyway?

Oh never mind, was looking at the other lighted sections of the forum.

Silly whimmy, people go there to read stories about fullhouse where all the characters kill each other, not gay hedgehog love
Although there is quite a bit of that as well

I find it hilarious that so many people thought you were being serious.