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Kyzak
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:05 pm
Posts: 1527
Location: (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*♥:・ﾟ✧
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Just so you know, procrastination generally doesn't work for those with no talent to better with it. I digress. I would honestly give you some C&C if I thought you put effort into this, but all I'm really seeing is a bunch of cool ideas you had shoved into one eight year old kid (which is really, really not suitable here. Unless of course this character can wield some sort of sword or use magic or something, at which point I would have already lost all hope). Additionally, if you couldn't take the time to read it over in Firefox and right-click the misspelled words, what can we expect?
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| Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:26 am |
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SS
Joined: Sat Aug 16, 2008 8:38 am Posts: 6670 Location: Darkest Antartica Country: 
Gender: Male
Skype: Thaiberium
Currently Playing: The Game
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Implausible as it may sound but, he could have been using IE.
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| Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:21 am |
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ll
Joined: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:27 am
Posts: 676
Location: NY
Gender: Anime Girl
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wait what? plus whats with all the good RPGers com'in down on me.....i dont my constructive criticism but honestly, it seems like you guys try to scare away anybody new to Rpging _________________ 
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| Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:59 am |
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Jin
Joined: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:44 pm Posts: 675 Location: Canada Country: 
Gender: N/A
Currently Playing: Dota 2
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Be happy that the good RPers are coming on you, you'll get the best advice, even if it is a harsh sort of manner. And if you didn't know, Firefox has spell check like microsoft word.
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| Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:10 am |
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SS
Joined: Sat Aug 16, 2008 8:38 am Posts: 6670 Location: Darkest Antartica Country:
Gender: Male
Skype: Thaiberium
Currently Playing: The Game
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Too bad it doesn't check grammar too.
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| Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:13 pm |
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Kyzak
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:05 pm
Posts: 1527
Location: (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*♥:・ﾟ✧
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Indeed, unfortunate.
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A Cat
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:22 pm
Posts: 1561
Location: <3 Melty Blud
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That's basically how it works. We beat the s*** out of it until you understand.
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spring break go shove it troll
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The Cool
Joined: Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:15 pm
Posts: 555
Gender: Anime Girl
Currently Playing: Sitting down and playing video games is for chumps.
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It's harsh, and unfriendly.
"I CAN learn, but I don't want to, becuase they're a bunch of douchebags."
Oversimplified example, but yeah.
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Kerim
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 8:49 am Posts: 762 Country: 
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Zero Time Dilemma
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This is actually pretty nice compared to what we usually do to profiles...
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Nini
Legendary Ghost
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:23 pm
Posts: 1797
Location: Where angels fear to tread, and man is but a cautionary tale.
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Harsh and all, you guys need to pull back a little.
I can't sit back and allow flaming, guys :/ there are ways to give constructive advice without being too harsh.
Now im off to my job.
Play nice...
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| Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:54 pm |
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A Cat
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:22 pm
Posts: 1561
Location: <3 Melty Blud
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What? A sandbox is an interesting place to train, but normally don't you need something to train against? Does he like beat the s*** out of the other orphans or what?
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{420}sMoKeWeEd{420}
Joined: Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:03 pm Posts: 2825 Location: being a genius Gender: little girl Country: 
Gender: Anime Girl
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This isn't a daycare center and we're not the little 5 year olds!
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The Cool
Joined: Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:15 pm
Posts: 555
Gender: Anime Girl
Currently Playing: Sitting down and playing video games is for chumps.
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The Sandbox should be capitalized, since it's the name of a specific place.
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A Cat
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:22 pm
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Location: <3 Melty Blud
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Really? I thought he was training IN A sandbox.
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The Cool
Joined: Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:15 pm
Posts: 555
Gender: Anime Girl
Currently Playing: Sitting down and playing video games is for chumps.
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No, its The Sandbox, the RP.
It's currently on hold until I get serious about RPing, however...
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