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Tid
Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:02 pm Posts: 7283 Location: Australia Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Tid
Currently Playing: Deep™ The™ Game™
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Maybe a darker outline would help with that Jedi.
_________________Ask me anything!!! Special thanks to Steven for my beautiful Deep avatar! <3
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Sat Oct 30, 2010 4:38 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Regardless, that doesnt help me fix it. @Tid: So you think itd be better with just one color as an outline too?
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Sat Oct 30, 2010 4:48 pm |
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Tid
Joined: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:02 pm Posts: 7283 Location: Australia Country:
Gender: Male
MGN Username: Tid
Currently Playing: Deep™ The™ Game™
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Not just one colour, but the pixels on the outline of your sprite should be darker.
_________________Ask me anything!!! Special thanks to Steven for my beautiful Deep avatar! <3
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Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:16 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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So... I decided to dust off Glitch and try to make him appear more like i origionally intended him to. I cant decide if i want the more cartoon like, or the more dull pallett. C+C please? I know there are more than likely a lot of flaws, probably mostly in the legs, and am hoping you can point them out.
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Sat Dec 18, 2010 3:52 pm |
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SirFatCat
Joined: Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:39 pm Posts: 228 Location: Somewhere in Nowhere.
Gender: Male
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| | | | glitch wrote: So... I decided to dust off Glitch and try to make him appear more like i origionally intended him to. [ Image ] I cant decide if i want the more cartoon like, or the more dull pallett. C+C please? I know there are more than likely a lot of flaws, probably mostly in the legs, and am hoping you can point them out. | | | | |
I don't like his legs.
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Sat Dec 18, 2010 6:10 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Neither do i, actually. I finally got the shape of his left leg correct... but its not shaded well. His right leg just isnt good... Any tips on how to fix it maybe...?
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Sat Dec 18, 2010 6:17 pm |
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SirFatCat
Joined: Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:39 pm Posts: 228 Location: Somewhere in Nowhere.
Gender: Male
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His right arm looks wierdly shaded, And his hair is not like the first sprite. (that you made before, like your avvi.)
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Sat Dec 18, 2010 7:06 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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His hair is more accurately portraying what i envisioned it as than in that picture. And yeah, i noticed, but i couldnt tell exactly what was wrong so i could fix it. :/ can you be more specific?
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Sat Dec 18, 2010 7:33 pm |
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SirFatCat
Joined: Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:39 pm Posts: 228 Location: Somewhere in Nowhere.
Gender: Male
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His arm looks buff, and at the same time, looks like he's just letting it hang there. His hair on the first sprite looked like it covered his eye. On this one, it doesn't and leaves open alot of his face.
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Sat Dec 18, 2010 8:22 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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I believe I already mentioned the hair is more accurately portrayed now than it was then? And yeah, the arm is supposed to be limp, but I don't know how to shade it limply... :/ any suggestions on what I should do to fix that?
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Sun Dec 19, 2010 12:32 am |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Is this any better?
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Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:09 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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Would someone please give me some constructive criticism...?
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:48 pm |
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SirFatCat
Joined: Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:39 pm Posts: 228 Location: Somewhere in Nowhere.
Gender: Male
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Wed Dec 22, 2010 3:23 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
Gender: Male
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um... yes there is...
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Wed Dec 22, 2010 4:01 pm |
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Blitzamirin
Joined: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:51 am Posts: 2014 Location: Paradise Country:
Gender: Male
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I can' say there is a difference.
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Wed Dec 22, 2010 4:04 pm |
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