Not bad, in fact I like it.

There is one mayor problem, and a little ones. The small ones is that there is a little to none movement from korah when he is talking (he should move his sword, or do something when he is told that "snow -I think that's panda's guy name- went easy on him") and, even if I like it, the movement from snow when he burries his sword should be more fluid.

Besides that, the big problem is that it "n33ds moar sh4dr4nd3r" ( ... ).

That's a good point, but what kind of movement should I add?

I got bored so I made this.

That font doesn't represent TLOK very well.

What are you talking, about snow or about korah??

• About snow, his movement is good enough... I only think it should more "fluid" (fast) and create more more smoke effect
• About korah, I think it should be something like This movement ( but faster , and without all that hair/head movement).
  
• About shad, he will just make your story better ( ... )

1) When?
2) Alright, I see what you mean, but that'll be hard to sprite.
3) Wtf is shad.

Lemme try again.
better?

Crazy good. Suggestion though. It will be a lot more engaging if you record voices.

That's not the kind of color I'd use. Besides, I can make my own logo.Grr, I can't do the voices.

Fine, just showing you stuff.
See now people want teh' voice acting.

When snow burries his sword into the ground, before saying "If you take it, I'll give it to you"... I would like him to burry the sword a lil' bit faster, and with more dust effects.



Shad-> viewtopic.php?f=14&t=7844

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(How is possible you didn't get I was joking ?)

kI get you were joking, I just didn't know who he was.

its so bad i want to cry

It'd be smart if you elaborated.