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Enigmae
Joined: Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:29 pm Posts: 42
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Name: Reken Nekoto
Race: Human
Age: 19
Alignment: Chaotic
Personality: Reken is usually laid-back, and takes things easily. On the field of battle, he is usually asks question before shooting. Sometimes, Reken will make a decision recklessly when faced with a life-threatening situation.
Powers: Reken is able to weild high-power and cost magick. While he cannot fight with his fists very well, he is an impressive strategist on the battlefeild.
Appearance: Reken is white, invariably caucasian. Reken usually wears a light robe of red, tan and black. Reken's eye color is black. Reken's hair is black, with short bangs going down to his eyes. Reken is slightly underweight, and can look a bit sickly at times.
Bio: Reken was born in a small country, and made a group of friends. As he grew up, he and his friends got tired of not being counted because they lives in a "small" country. So he and his friends formed a group called INSPECTORS to fight out larger continents. The INSPECTORS' are planning some sort of raid on one of the bigger countries in the world.
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Last edited by Enigmae on Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Sep 25, 2008 8:33 pm |
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Copy'n'Paste
Joined: Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:22 am Posts: 606
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I guess it's OK. It's true that it is a bit short. But I'm only a rookie and I can't comment well.
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Fri Sep 26, 2008 1:36 am |
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Kyzak
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 2:05 pm Posts: 1527 Location: (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*♥:・゚✧
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Well, I'd believe that the appearance could use a bit more detail; Eye color, other such things.
The only problem I'd have with this bio is the background; Most tell the reader a bit about what happened before the current events (Namely something as big as making a group so wide it'll probably conquer a country).
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Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:29 am |
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Reaver Valentine
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life.
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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no one post the Charecters eye color
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Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:12 pm |
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Nini
Legendary Ghost
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:23 pm Posts: 1797 Location: Where angels fear to tread, and man is but a cautionary tale.
Gender: Anime Girl
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I have my characters eye color in both my profiles..and ive seen others, it may seem like a "minor" detail, but when you're creating a character of any depth or creativity, such a simple thing as eye color doesn't go unaccounted for. So no, its not -too- big a deal, but people do certainly post their color.
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Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:16 pm |
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Reaver Valentine
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:27 pm Posts: 371 Location: Everywhere and nowhere trying to find my place in life.
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Final Fantasy 7, Dissidia Final Fantasy,Tony Hawk UnderGround,Ape Escape On the loose, Ape Escape 2 Digaea 1
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_________________ "Why use doors? Window's are fun to use when entering and leaving a building" "Reaver, use the damn door or I'm charging all the bills I get from the window repair men to you." "Alright, alright I will, later." *CRASH* "DAMN IT REAVER!"
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Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:54 pm |
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Nini
Legendary Ghost
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:23 pm Posts: 1797 Location: Where angels fear to tread, and man is but a cautionary tale.
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Never said everyone, read >.>...i was simply saying people do do it.
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Tue Oct 14, 2008 10:08 pm |
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Hakker
Legendary Ghost
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:42 am Posts: 12630 Location: Belgium Country:
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Currently Playing: Final Fantasy XI, Left 4 Dead 2
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And not everyone makes a good bio, you twit.
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Kevin
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 6:49 am Posts: 2944 Location: Alexandria, Virginia Country:
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Currently Playing: playerunknown battlegrounds
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Thu Oct 16, 2008 3:44 pm |
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Nate
Joined: Fri Oct 24, 2008 8:39 am Posts: 767 Location: The one place you'd never look
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Does he have an eating disorder? All joking aside, what do you mean by a chaotic alignment?
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Team Chaotex
Joined: Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:37 pm Posts: 429 Location: Realizing that I should be doing homework right now
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Obviously he likes to destroy things. Especially ordered things.
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