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Nicko
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Is that meant to be the Super Smash Bros.(4) Battlefield?
The lineart looks amazing.
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Fri Nov 01, 2013 7:23 pm |
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Nintendo95
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Nintendo95
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Now The green grassy textures looks much better. And what do you think about the platforms?
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Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:35 pm |
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Tid
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your lineart is actually really good. needs a bit of cleaning up but it's a fantastic base to work from. work a LOT harder on your colouring though, it looks like you're using some sort of weird texture and you shouldn't do that for stages. start by filling in all the areas with their base colour with no shading, and then go back and make darker lighter areas. texturing should happen last pretty much.
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Nintendo95
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What do you guys think of my Marth sprite?
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Fri Nov 08, 2013 2:09 pm |
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TacThree
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the sword looks weird, and the head also looks weird. the body looks perfect though. maybe try making the sword look more like it has a unique shape as opposed to just looking like a dinky little sliver of metal. and the head... idk, it looks odd though. probably the shape of it is throwing me off DEIT: I think it's his neck... his head looks too far away from his body
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Fri Nov 08, 2013 2:15 pm |
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Nintendo95
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So I fixed the head and the sword.
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Fri Nov 08, 2013 2:51 pm |
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clubby
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The sword looks like a spike, and the head still looks strange imo
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Fri Nov 08, 2013 4:18 pm |
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TacThree
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because all he did was change the color of the head. I guess he doesn't see anything odd about it so that's fine I guess. the sword though, it looks like he's trying to go for a foreshortening kind of look to it but it isn't really coming out that well.
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Fri Nov 08, 2013 4:39 pm |
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DJ Wizard Cop
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I don't tend to critique well so feel free to ignore me, but I think reducing your color count will drastically improve your sprites. There's a high amount of banding in your work, and some like banding and that's cool, but I think it's taking away your quality.
Reducing your color count will help you make sprites faster since you don't have to worry about 5+ colors per shade, while also helping you communicate shapes better.
Your outlines are nice though.
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Fri Nov 08, 2013 5:07 pm |
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Nintendo95
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Sat Nov 09, 2013 7:39 am |
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clubby
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Can you box the image? It's huge! The head on the third one is a downgrade imo
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Sat Nov 09, 2013 7:39 pm |
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Titan
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That SSB4 stage is looking good.
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Sat Nov 09, 2013 10:27 pm |
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Nintendo95
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_________________- ̗̀My Pikachu will show you the fastest way DOWN! ̖́-competitive ssf2 ruined ssf2..
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Sun Nov 10, 2013 4:54 am |
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clubby
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Sun Nov 10, 2013 7:38 am |
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