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 Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A 
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Ahh nice! You have another shade on the sleeve which looks a lot nicer, the bottom should have another pixel or two though ;D
The shading is good but rough in places, the left hip needs some shading and all around the colours need at least one more shade. Use a lighter shade for the pants and the shirt to add depth and the such and it should be fine, if you're having troubles check out some jus sprites. I just noticed that the left hand has a brighter shade as well, it should just be solid dark. _________________  |
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| Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:46 pm |
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 Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:48 am Posts: 56 Location: away Gender: Male
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comments in bold, anyway thanks, lets see what I can do. _________________ signature goes over here... nothing else to it... |
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| Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:57 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A
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You should actually avoid the black and replace it with a darker grey but it seems to look fine here. its left. _________________ |
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| Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:16 pm |
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Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:48 am Posts: 56 Location: away Gender: Male
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ok thanks
EDIT: what do you mean by overall colors need at least one more shade? _________________ signature goes over here... nothing else to it... |
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| Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:25 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A
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Just the pants and shirt need another shade, I just suck at wording sentences. _________________ |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:21 pm |
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Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:48 am Posts: 56 Location: away Gender: Male
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no, no I ment by more pixels of shading or another color of shading? _________________ signature goes over here... nothing else to it... |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:22 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A
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A lighter shade. _________________ |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:23 pm |
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Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:48 am Posts: 56 Location: away Gender: Male
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oh well ok thats already done... BTW how do you make a sprite transperant with paint, if you can't how can I? _________________ signature goes over here... nothing else to it... |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:30 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A
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Just get paint.net, it's easy to grasp if you're new to the program. _________________ |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:42 pm |
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Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:48 am Posts: 56 Location: away Gender: Male
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alright thanks... I'll make em transperant some other day I'll focus on the sprites for now
UPDATE:  der dem shadin' and changed the foot a little. both shading on the pants, and the foot change based off the naruto sprite, critique please _________________ signature goes over here... nothing else to it... |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:46 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A
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Hmm.
Now the shirt looks like its made of plastic. Notice how in JUS the shading adds depth.  This takes a lot of time to perfect so remember to stay patient and focused. _________________ |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 6:59 pm |
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Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:48 am Posts: 56 Location: away Gender: Male
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Do you think it could be the light colors at the top of the shirt and can you use a different example cause this guy is wearing a jacket, and has a striped shirt... _________________ signature goes over here... nothing else to it... |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:03 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A
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just look up JUS sprites and find an example. _________________ |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:14 pm |
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Joined: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:48 am Posts: 56 Location: away Gender: Male
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though this example could be helpful in some ways UPDATE:  changed the foot again and added shading MUST GET CRITIQUE...pweez _________________ signature goes over here... nothing else to it... |
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| Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:35 pm |
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Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229 Gender: N/A
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Getting better, the new right foot messes with it though, it's mainly because the knee is in an awkward position. The waist of the pants is really messed up as well, the left leg should have almost no light and the inside of the pants should be darker. The belt also has no shading. Sorry if i'm misleading or confusing but I think you should be able to pull what I mean out of this.
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