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[Another bio, redone] Seth Hirose. 

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[Another bio, redone] Seth Hirose. 
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Name: Seth Hirose. [Best I could do, right-on-the-spot.]

Age:17 [Someone here hates child prodigies, right?]

Height and weight: H: 6"2, W: 140.

Personality: Cheerful, yet annoyed at most time, enjoys to spend his time with whoever is with him. [Short and simple]

Background/Past-Experiences: He was born in 1992, with his family in the east, he still resides there, but travels he can go, with permission of course. His brother is off fighting a war currently. His living family in the present are his Father and Brother. His mother perished when he was 6, though it hasn't phased him much, he maintains his cheerful attitude all the while, even while inside he isn't.

Appearence: Blonde, spiky hair, about the size of a full-size-pencil each strand. Wears a katana on his waist, in it's sheath. Currently wearing a soft, black jacket. same color pants, down to his feet. [Again, best I could do, right on the spot.]


Emotional Position: Nothing too serious, at the moment.

Race: American-Asian, Human.. [What I really am, please no racism about this.]



Will be updated. Commentary is appreciated. I will begin roleplay once I have recieved enough commentary.

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He desperately searches the reason he goes on in life, though he finds nothing to guide him through his journey, he seeks the help. Though, slowly the truth comes to him: He lives for his friends. 11-26-09


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Last edited by UnexpectedLight on Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:24 pm, edited 2 times in total.



Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:08 pm
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UnexpectedLight wrote:
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Name: Seth Hirose. [Best I could do, right-on-the-spot.]

Age:17 [Someone here hates child prodigies, right?]nice call

Personality: Cheerful, yet annoyed at most time, enjoys to spend his time with whoever is with him. [Short and simple]

Background/Past-Experiences: He was born in 1992, with his family in the east, he still resides there, but travels he can go, with permission of course. His brother is off fighting a war currently.please alittle more detail

Appearence: Blonde, spiky hair, about the size of a full-size-pencil each strand. Wears a katana on his waist, in it's sheath. Currently wearing a soft, black jacket. same color pants, down to his feet. [Again, best I could do, right on the spot.]hmm... cloud?


Emotional Position: Nothing too serious, at the moment.seriously this shouldn't exist

Race: American-Asian, Human.. [What I really am, please no racism about this.]o.k.



Will be updated. Commentary is appreciated.

i got to say this isn't uhh... bad for someone who made a character right on the spot, follow the bold texting in the box above i hope your next edit will be better.


Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:34 pm
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To be honest, i'm better at roleplay itself, not the bio's.

Oh, and thank you, edited. Cloud doesn't own a katana, though the description is a little close to his. Cloud owns a wide-long sword, otherwise known as the "Buster Sword".

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Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:13 pm
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...Seth Hirose? ...wtf dude? It sounds like a retarded spanish-Jap Hybrid name >_> Change it to something... Less weaboo ish.


Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:56 pm
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No short notice johns in rp bios, son.

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Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:26 pm
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UnexpectedLight wrote:
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Name: Seth Hirose. [Best I could do, right-on-the-spot.] Bizarre looking, but eh.

Age:17 [Someone here hates child prodigies, right?] 17 is still kinda in the prodigy zone.

Height and weight: H: 6"2, W: 140. Don't feel looking at weight to height scale now.

Personality: Cheerful, yet annoyed at most time, enjoys to spend his time with whoever is with him. [Short and simple]

Background/Past-Experiences: He was born in 1992, with his family in the east, he still resides there, but travels he can go, with permission of course. His brother is off fighting a war currently What war?. His living family in the present are his Father and Brother. His mother perished when he was 6, though it hasn't phased him much Really? Why?, he maintains his cheerful attitude all the while, even while inside he isn't.

Appearence: Blonde, spiky hair, about the size of a full-size-pencil each strand Looking at the nearest pencil, that is LONG. Wears a katana on his waist, in it's sheath A katana. In what seems to be modern times. I'm not gonna touch that. Currently wearing a soft, black jacket. same color pants, down to his feet. [Again, best I could do, right on the spot.]


Emotional Position: Nothing too serious, at the moment. I have no idea

Race: American-Asian, Human.. [What I really am This is starting to sound a self-insert here., please no racism about this.]



Will be updated. Commentary is appreciated. I will begin roleplay once I have recieved enough commentary.

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Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:30 pm
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Not to bash, but this seems like a typical anime character.

Also, I don't think asians naturally have blonde hair.

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Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:44 pm
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I've seen one, her father was European.

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Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:16 pm
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O-K. That's enough for now, thank you all, I hope enjoy the roleplay world.

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He desperately searches the reason he goes on in life, though he finds nothing to guide him through his journey, he seeks the help. Though, slowly the truth comes to him: He lives for his friends. 11-26-09


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