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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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yeah,im re-positioning it along with fixing the left arm and re-positioning the legs a bit
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Sun Sep 18, 2011 6:13 pm |
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bigworld
Joined: Tue Sep 20, 2011 9:03 pm Posts: 3
Gender: Anime Girl
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Don't outline the muscles in that extra color. Use the darkest shade before that to show that it's there, but don't outline it like that. Coach Purses| coach outlet| coach factory outlet
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Tue Sep 20, 2011 11:25 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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Took a break from spriting.Anyway this is a rust breaker. Just a metal man sprite ive been doing for the past 2 days,although i need help on what to do for his pants/boots.Ive been testing on it to sprite something with armor and non-human-ish to much.IMO his lower body need tons of work but i tried to do stuff on it,but failed. Any cc would be good here is a update on rin Just relocated his neck,and relocated his arms a bit.
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Sat Sep 24, 2011 8:30 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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update on it
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Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:24 pm |
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Road Hog
Joined: Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:54 pm Posts: 137 Location: no
Gender: Male
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That isn't looking too hot. I think you should work on the parts where it shines.
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:35 pm |
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Nick
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:31 am Posts: 2229
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I emphasize this everytime but you need to plan your sprites better otherwise they will always look awkward.
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:38 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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Yeah,i might remake him (his lower body atleast) Anywho ive been seeing soooo many Toon Links lately but this one pushed me to make my own http://badassbill.deviantart.com/galler ... k#/d17bv32Anyways on to mine (ill probably be spriting some ssbb chars.along with anime again)
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:39 pm |
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Road Hog
Joined: Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:54 pm Posts: 137 Location: no
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Looks good so far. It's outline looks edgy in some places. The looks very stiff IMO.
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 8:19 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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NO. His lower body and torso are the best parts. His ARMS are awkwardly shaped. Really, the legs look pretty damn good. After your fix they looked pretty nice! Toon link has too many straight looking edges though. Looks sort of like a paper cutout.
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 8:46 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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Alright ill fix up metal man a bit later. Also i took some of the straight edges out and gave him new colors. Ill start a poll to vote on it.
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Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:29 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
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Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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a little update on toon link(i know he looks pretty stiff ill fix that later)
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Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:14 pm |
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Road Hog
Joined: Mon Feb 07, 2011 4:54 pm Posts: 137 Location: no
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Oh yeah this is getting better and better.
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Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:23 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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Here is viewtiful joe (thinking about sheeting him or just give him a few animations)
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Thu Sep 29, 2011 9:08 pm |
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reborn574
Joined: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:20 pm Posts: 104 Location: F!@#......behind that tree over there
Gender: Male
Currently Playing: Ultimate Marvel vs Capcom 3
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UPDATE on viewtiful joe D: i forgot his goatee
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Fri Sep 30, 2011 5:54 pm |
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Glitch
Joined: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:23 am Posts: 1305 Location: in front of the computer
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the head looks fine, but... Almost nothing about that body is readable. Nothing that makes sense anyway. It looks like all of his bones had to have been broken for you to have posed him that way. :/ You have great potential, you just need to work on what makes sense!
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Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:44 pm |
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