Hmm? Alright, let's see...
I'll talk about your SS3 Broly. The first thing I'd like to point out is your shoddy linework. With the crude edges you've left on his outline, various other mistakes can become apparent. They're bold, give a feeling of being nonprofessional, and drastically decrease the value and credibility of your claims.
The muscles go beyond what was shown in DBZ and begin to branch out into "Liefeldian" proportions. That's a bad thing. Go look up the work he's done for comic books and you'll see what I mean. Hell, they're so massive that they blend together and resemble that flesh abomination from Akira. Not to mention they're about to engulf his head. It's not that it's too tiny, but sitting off to the side like that can't be good for his spine.
I don't feel I need to point out the flaws in your energy field. They're so obvious that even Geno could find them.
Also, when you almost completely copy another artist's piece, you can't really claim to have drawn it. The one you based it off of (
found here) is extraordinarily better and is much cleaner. All you did was degrade it, add hair and bloom, and post it in your DeviantArt gallery. That's a bit cheap, don't you think?