*Suli's recent sprite stuff: Kuroda Jin and random drawings*
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Suli
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And much later... Updated some stuff. Also. Yeah, I know I have a billion things to work on. Marth, Mochran, soon Dragos and Hanatarou, maybe Lucci, etc. But about a month or two ago I started reading Defense Devil, and iunno, with the latest chapters I felt like doing a Kucabara expansion so... Dunno, major WIP. Just whipped it up in the past 15 minutes because I needed to get his base down. Kucabara's going to be an expansion for sure, so I'll get to sheeting him eventually. C+C? (Especially you K', I know you can find at least 10 things for me to fix, which would be appreciated.) Edit: THE MIGHTY PEN SWORD!
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Sun May 09, 2010 9:31 pm |
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Friesnchip
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Alright, I don't know any of these characters, so my let's call the guy in blue Left and the other one Right. Left's arm (on our right) is much shorter than his back one, which is wrong perspective wise. Also, the coat's shading is just wrong, it basically outlines the edges and that's it. Also... his hand (our left) seems a tad odd, and the coat doesn't come down as far on his wrist compared to his other hand.
Now, Right looks a bit worse. His hair has little to no shading and looks... well a bit rough around the edges. I'm sure his hair is like that in the manga, but when you change the pallet of his hair from brown to white it looks bad, why not change the outline to grey instead? It's also hard to distinguish what is on the upper part of his coat, everything looks pretty cluttered, maybe cut down on some minor details?
You said that this only took a few minutes, and I can tell because you've done a lot better in the past, so I'm sure after some more criticism you'll be able to figure out what to fix and come up with some great sprites. (and get some work done on Marth and Dragos, seriously)
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Wed May 12, 2010 8:37 pm |
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Suli
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| | | | Friesnchip wrote: Alright, I don't know any of these characters, so my let's call the guy in blue Left and the other one Right. Left's arm (on our right) is much shorter than his back one, which is wrong perspective wise. I thought that, I'll fix. Also, the coat's shading is just wrong, it basically outlines the edges and that's it. ...Eh. I've never done a single full-body garment so I wasn't sure what to do with it. Also... his hand (our left) seems a tad odd, and the coat doesn't come down as far on his wrist compared to his other hand. Noticed that too, also will fix.
Now, Right looks a bit worseYeah, only because I was trying to get every single detail in... His hair has little to no shading and looks... well a bit rough around the edges.I'm sure his hair is like that in the manga, but when you change the pallet of his hair from brown to white it looks bad, why not change the outline to grey instead? Outline's already grey, but I should make it lighter. It's also hard to distinguish what is on the upper part of his coat, everything looks pretty cluttered, maybe cut down on some minor details? Which would most likely fix the problem. I'll get on that.
You said that this only took a few minutes, and I can tell because you've done a lot better in the past, so I'm sure after some more criticism you'll be able to figure out what to fix and come up with some great sprites.Yeah. I'll get on it, maybe tonight if I have time, it not, this weekend. I needed to get the base done at the very least though. (and get some work done on Marth and Dragos, seriously)Goddammit but I'm lazy. Although I did do something for Marth a while back...
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Edit: Better?
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Wed May 12, 2010 8:48 pm |
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yoh
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looks a bit better but is it ok if i say that the guy with white hais his left hand looks strange.
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Fri May 21, 2010 7:40 pm |
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Super Duper
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Is that sword suppose to be that big, because that seems a bit huge for my taste.
The two characters I'm really looking foward is Gannondorf and Andy. I think you sprited them very well and Andy looks like he will be an interesting character.
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Fri May 21, 2010 9:06 pm |
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Suli
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The sword is gigantic, yes. It's to be wielded by his demon form, on the right. It's yeah, uh, supposed to be larger than Ike's Ragnell or Ichigo's Zangetsu. And the hand is meant to be gripping the sword there, yoh, I just seperated it for later uses.
Anyway. Yeah, Ganon and Andy are on hold only because I think I'm going to resprite them, right now I'm focused on Marth, Mochran, and any manga characters.
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Fri May 21, 2010 9:30 pm |
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Super Duper
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Well hope you the best and nothing bad upon you. ...And now I really would want to see the guy that wields that sword to be finished...100%!!
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Sat May 22, 2010 12:44 am |
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-Vihn-
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<Na>Suliboy keep up the good work would like to see more of these sprites.
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 2:16 am |
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AEM
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Well, a lot of work looks awesome Suli, even though I don't know how to sprite, and if I attempt to the world would implode and become an endless abyss. Also hello.
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 2:58 am |
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Suli
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Well, I'm on summer break now, finally, so I'll have time to sprite and probably sheet some stuff. Also hi, AEM.
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:47 pm |
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Suli
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*updates* Haven't really done much for other sheets, I've been focusing mainly on Marth, which I won't be showing. Aside from that, added a few more JUS things that I plan to do eventually...
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Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:27 pm |
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Kcoo. @Suliboy How hig is Reborn's priority?
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Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:31 pm |
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Suli
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Pretty high, but all that's left is the rest of his FS. But I'm putting Marth first.
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Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:39 pm |
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Suli
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Well, since FE expansions should match the official expansion ones... New Soooooooooooooooooooothe~
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Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:13 pm |
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Living Shadow
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'Tis perdy Though the foot on our right looks like it just squishes together when the leg rises :/
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