NinjaDude Jumping

NinjaDude using Shippuga

The design isn't bad, but could use the wings on the stance

I just got a flashback

Hmm.

The cape or wings could use a little motion, and the blur itself really isn't that good. The inner color of the blur matches the background color, which is a no no, and the blur itself needs to be a bit more 'blurry like'. It's kinda hard to explain, but basically, the blur kinda has to get shorter when it about to end. Look at some other examples from sprite like JUS. As for the color issue, maybe make it the color of the limb or item being swept? As for the sprite itself, it's could use some work. Not to be rude or anything, but the sprite looks like an obvious edit of 8-bit Mega Man. Though I will say it is a good start to edit. Try to make it less of an edit. Shape and move the limbs a little. I don't really know a lot about 8-bit, but animating is something that I understand clearly, so I hope I can help.

Oh, one more thing, try not to use white backgrounds when creating sprites.

I used transparent,but pivot requires a certain layout.
His wings could be folded out on his "Ready" stance,and he should get an edit as soon as I get My flash drive repaired

The Ninja Dude character could use a larger sprite, and not just a megaman edit. Ever tried customs?

Yes I have tried customs before,but failed.
since my flash drive is broken,I can try to make a few custom sprites.

Here is one I made today:

Having only one of the legs moving makes the pose look kinda awkward, and the hair shouldn't move like that. Also, it needs more body movement

My paint.net erased the hair so I had to put it back and I did it wrong. I'll try a v2 later.

Here is an action that I made:

It's a good start, but when it blasts something that big, wouldn't they move back at least a bit? Also, he doesn't blink in that one, and it all-in-all seems a bit awkward. When animating, you should use a smooth transition. Also, there's a slow part, which isn't good when animating.

Yeah,I should have Moved the Blast 4 pixels per frame,rather than one,and NinjaDude should move back,like Megaman using a Charge Shot in SSF2(a game on this website)

A Version in Mother 3 Style for a game I'm making(this only used a base made by members of another Forums)

1. If you use another person's work to edit, give credit
2. The colors on the pants are a bit to bright imo, and the hair line isn't necessary